[COMPLETE]The Unconditional Freeness of the Gospel-mtf

[mightyfelix]

Section 3: 38:18

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/unconditionalfreeness_03_erskine_128kb.mp3

Another good chapter, and well read. I just caught one spot where I'd like a small correction.

29:08 There's a word flip here that changes the meaning of the sentence. Text reads (p. 85): "It is not that the swine and the husks satisfy anyone..." I hear: "Is it not that the swine and the husks satisfy anyone..." which makes this sound like a question.

[mightyfelix]

Section 4, 20:22
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/unconditionalfreeness_04_erskine_128kb.mp3

PL ok!

[MrsHand]

Section 3: 38:18

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/unconditionalfreeness_03_erskine_128kb.mp3

Another good chapter, and well read. I just caught one spot where I'd like a small correction.

29:08 There's a word flip here that changes the meaning of the sentence. Text reads (p. 85): "It is not that the swine and the husks satisfy anyone..." I hear: "Is it not that the swine and the husks satisfy anyone..." which makes this sound like a question.

Here's the corrected file! Now 38:17.

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/unconditionalfreeness_03_erskine_128kb.mp3

[redrun]

Chapter 1 is up!
Duration: 40m30s
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/unconditionalfreeness_01_erskine_128kb.mp3

[mightyfelix]

Here's the corrected file! Now 38:17.

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/unconditionalfreeness_03_erskine_128kb.mp3

Nicely edited. PL ok now.

[mightyfelix]

Chapter 5 is done, duration 21:58
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/unconditionalfreeness_05_erskine_128kb.mp3

This was my first time PLing for you, and I think you did a great job! I really enjoyed listening and look forward to the next one.

I am going to ask for a few small edits here, and I apologize that this wasn't spelled out clearly in the first post. I do not want the side bars included in this book. Side bars are quite helpful for visually scanning a page, but confusing, I think, in audio format. In this chapter, they all occur at the beginning of paragraphs, but I don't think that's the case throughout the book, so it can make for weird interjections sometimes. All that being said, I've noted the few spots where we need these phrases removed.

0:26 Delete "Two fields of Christianity."
3:45 Delete "To know God is to sympathize with Him."
7:47 Delete "The meaning of 'Sell all that thou hast.'"
12:28 Delete "Man's misery and its cure."
15:54 Delete "Why salvation comes by faith."

Queuing up chapter 1 now!

[mightyfelix]

Chapter 1 is up!
Duration: 40m30s
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/unconditionalfreeness_01_erskine_128kb.mp3

Very well read again, but I'm sure you were now expecting that I'd ask you to remove the side bars again. Thanks!

0:29 Delete "Apparent contradictions."
4:14 Delete "The disease of the soul, and its medicine."
12:11 Delete "Teaching of the Bible."
13:54 Delete "Man a receiver."
17:53 Delete "The nature of true humility."
21:31 Delete "Man's false center and his true center."
25:48 Delete "Relations between the Creator and the creature."
37:23 I would like this footnote on page 27 included, if you don't mind. Again, I didn't specify this beforehand, and footnotes are sometimes omitted. But there is lots of good stuff in here, so it would be great if we could have it! You can read it as follows: "...atheism and of idolatry. Footnote: [read the footnote]. End of footnote. This atheism of the heart..."

[redrun]

I am going to ask for a few small edits here, and I apologize that this wasn't spelled out clearly in the first post. I do not want the side bars included in this book.

Ah, I see. I had seen the question about voicing side-bars, and assumed there must be some of those in other chapters!

Section 5 has been updated, link should be the same. Edited duration: 21m58s
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/unconditionalfreeness_05_erskine_128kb.mp3

To my ears, the topic changes now seem a bit jarring in this chapter. Could just be that I'm used to hearing the other way now, but if adjusting the silence length or something could improve it, please do let me know.

I'll get the footnote added to chapter 1, then edit it with whatever suggestions you have from this one.

[redrun]

Well, chapter 1 doesn't seem to have the same problem, after all. Now with footnote!
Duration: 42m12s
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/unconditionalfreeness_01_erskine.mp3

[mightyfelix]

Thank you for these corrections. I've been feeling very drained lately, so haven't been here as often as I like to. But I have a long weekend starting, so I will be able to check these in the next few days.

[mightyfelix]

I am going to ask for a few small edits here, and I apologize that this wasn't spelled out clearly in the first post. I do not want the side bars included in this book.

Ah, I see. I had seen the question about voicing side-bars, and assumed there must be some of those in other chapters!

Section 5 has been updated, link should be the same. Edited duration: 21m58s
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/unconditionalfreeness_05_erskine_128kb.mp3

To my ears, the topic changes now seem a bit jarring in this chapter. Could just be that I'm used to hearing the other way now, but if adjusting the silence length or something could improve it, please do let me know.

I'll get the footnote added to chapter 1, then edit it with whatever suggestions you have from this one.

This seems to be the same file as before. I am still hearing the side bars voiced, and the duration has not changed from your first upload, as it should if they had been deleted.

[mightyfelix]

Well, chapter 1 doesn't seem to have the same problem, after all. Now with footnote!
Duration: 42m12s
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/unconditionalfreeness_01_erskine.mp3

The audio is PL ok now, perfect!

However, be careful on your file name. You left off the '_128kb' from the end. No worries this time around, as I can fix that before cataloguing, but this is something to watch for in the future.

[redrun]

Chapter 5 for real this time, with 20 seconds shaved off - 21m38s
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/unconditionalfreeness_05_erskine_128kb.mp3

[Bruce0McFadden]

Chapter 6 of "freeness" submmitted
TRT 35' 00"
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/unconditionalfreeness_06_erskine_128kb.mp3

Bruce ><>

[Bruce0McFadden]

I have not heard back from my submission of Section 6 for PL. I am returning section 7 for another reader to take.

Bruce ><>