COMPLETE[PLAY]Which is the Man?, by Cowley - thw
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May I please switch my claim from Fitzherbert to Beauchamp?
Thank you!
Greg
Thank you!
Greg
Done.
Thanks, Todd
Thanks, Todd
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Thank you.
Todd
Todd
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Here are the four acts of Beauchamp:
Act One -
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_beauchamp_1.mp3
Act Three -
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_beauchamp_3.mp3
Act Four -
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_beauchamp_4.mp3
Act Five -
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_beauchamp_5.mp3
Take care,
Greg
Act One -
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_beauchamp_1.mp3
Act Three -
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_beauchamp_3.mp3
Act Four -
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_beauchamp_4.mp3
Act Five -
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_beauchamp_5.mp3
Take care,
Greg
Thank you.
Todd
Todd
excellently acted, Greg, as I thought you would you give him the right mixture of brave soldier when defending a woman's honour, but also reluctant obedience to Lord Sparkle and finally shy devotion to Lady Bell. Quite a complex character, well done.
Acts 3 and 5 are already PL ok.
PL notes for Act 1:
> at 0:45: (p. 6) "that my heart has not been insensible of the charms" – you say "indefensible"
> from 1:21 to 1:25: (p. 7) between "dear idea" and "that would be" – you can cut the long pause, it's the same sentence
PL notes for Act 4:
> at 0:20: (p. 33) "and whilst she flies" – you say "the"
> at about 6:40: (p. 43) two missed quotes: "What can I think of all this ?" and "Permit me, Madam, to ask if you have long known Mr Belville ?"
thank you
Sonia
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Thanks, Sonia. I will try to fix in the next day or so.Kitty wrote: ↑July 11th, 2022, 11:57 pmexcellently acted, Greg, as I thought you would you give him the right mixture of brave soldier when defending a woman's honour, but also reluctant obedience to Lord Sparkle and finally shy devotion to Lady Bell. Quite a complex character, well done.
Acts 3 and 5 are already PL ok.
PL notes for Act 1:
> at 0:45: (p. 6) "that my heart has not been insensible of the charms" – you say "indefensible"
> from 1:21 to 1:25: (p. 7) between "dear idea" and "that would be" – you can cut the long pause, it's the same sentence
PL notes for Act 4:
> at 0:20: (p. 33) "and whilst she flies" – you say "the"
> at about 6:40: (p. 43) two missed quotes: "What can I think of all this ?" and "Permit me, Madam, to ask if you have long known Mr Belville ?"
thank you
Sonia
I appreciate the feedback, as always encouraging!
Take care,
Greg
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Here are Acts 1 & 4 of Beauchamp with corrections:
Act One:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_beauchamp_1.mp3
Act Four:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_beauchamp_4.mp3
Take care,
Greg
Act One:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_beauchamp_1.mp3
Act Four:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_beauchamp_4.mp3
Take care,
Greg
perfect edits and PL ok now, thank again, GregGregGiordano wrote: ↑July 12th, 2022, 7:53 pmHere are Acts 1 & 4 of Beauchamp with corrections:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_beauchamp_1.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_beauchamp_4.mp3
Sonia
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Hello, I'd like to claim the role of Julia, please
Matea Bracic
“Outside of a dog, a book is a man’s best friend. Inside of a dog it’s too dark to read.”
-Groucho Marx
“Outside of a dog, a book is a man’s best friend. Inside of a dog it’s too dark to read.”
-Groucho Marx
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Thank you!Kitty wrote: ↑July 13th, 2022, 4:18 amperfect edits and PL ok now, thank again, GregGregGiordano wrote: ↑July 12th, 2022, 7:53 pmHere are Acts 1 & 4 of Beauchamp with corrections:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_beauchamp_1.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/whichistheman_beauchamp_4.mp3
Sonia
Thank you.
Todd