wow thank you, this was faster than I could hope for
and I especially loved the x-ray explanations on the paintings. Quite fascinating.
Wonderfully narrated again, but I still found a few small spots to edit in both sections, if you could still do those and reupload, that would be perfect:
PL notes for Section 20:
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from 5:00 to 5:02: (p. 186) between "faultlessly dressed" and "I am the agent" –
long pause
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from 15:07 to 15:09: (p. 192) between "picked up his apparatus" and "you will think" –
long pause
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from 15:13 to 15:15: (p. 192) between "as we left" and "and let you know" –
long pause
PL notes for Section 21:
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from 8:07 to 8:15: (p. 197)
repetition, one version can get cut: "Let me show you the practical result of all this in studying such radiographs, as worked out by a German student"
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at 9:38: (p. 197) part of the sentence missing (underlined): "of which not a trace is to be found either in the other
radiograph or the painting itself"
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from 10:56 to 10:59: (p. 198) between "no such defects" and "Kennedy paused" –
long pause
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from 12:58 to 13:01: (p. 199) between "superposed coat" and "he had laid" –
long pause
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from 13:07 to 13:09: (p. 199) between "as he faced us" and "at the bottom" –
long pause
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at 16:29: (p. 201) "
she turned" – you say "
he"
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at the end: you have
6 seconds of silence instead of the
standard 5
thank you !
Sonia