Well read. Your distinct character voices bring it to life.mr2nique wrote: ↑March 4th, 2022, 12:59 pm I have completed recording section 14:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/plattnerstory_14_wells_128kb.mp3 (21:18)
Thank you in advance for the proofing.
Section 14 notes:
shorten silence in beginning to .5-1 second
0:49 say "pence" instead of d. (I only know this because I made the same error in the past and google.)
0:54 say "pence" instead of d.
2:17 should be "Mrs. Winslow vanished"; I heard "Miss Winslow vanished"
7:14 should be "Mrs. Winslow's shoulders"; I heard "Miss Winslow's shoulders"
7:16 missing sentence "That sent him off in another direction"
Also, next sentence should be "He became acutely sensible of Minnie's"; I heard "He became actively sensible of Minnie's"
8:12 missing sentence "How he hated writing letters!"
11:02 Missing word "day"; should be "this day three week"
13:45 should be "It didn't do for folks to be too proud"; I heard "It didn't do her folks to be too proud"
14:34 should be "tempering the wind to shorn";I heard "tempered the wind to shorn"
16:39 should be "She had her housemaid's gloves"; I heard "He had her housemaid's gloves"
20:18 should be "walked in a hushed manner"; I heard " walked in a husband manner"
21:09 remove "read by ...Washington" already stated in beginning of recording
Make sure there is 5 seconds silence at the end of the recording
Thanks!
Christine
