[COMPLETE] The Sentimental Song Book - tg

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mleigh wrote: December 23rd, 2021, 3:16 pm
At 0:43 , the end of the line is difficult for me to understand but it seem longer than than just the word "o'er".
At 0:45-1:00, it is a repeat of the previous verse, the last line is much clearer than the earlier one at 0:43.

Just to let you know, although no correction is required, that the ends of your lines tend to decrease in volume.

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M

right, so i only really need to remove the repeat, verse. I'll have to keep a look out on the falling voice level. Ta.
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https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/sentimentalsongbook_05_moore_128kb.mp3

Section 05 uploaded.
Time: 1:45

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Time for Section 01 is 3:40.
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Hello,

Could I do Section 29, "Maryette Myers"?

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ahibbard wrote: December 30th, 2021, 2:06 pm Hello,

Could I do Section 29, "Maryette Myers"?

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Anita
Thank you

The section is yours.

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thestorygirl wrote: December 28th, 2021, 1:56 pm Section 21 uploaded.
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/sentimentalsongbook_21_moore_128kb.mp3

Time: 1:39
Sections 5 and 21 are PL OK. :)

Two small corrections needed for section 1.
0:03 should be "By Julia A Moore" not "by unknown,
3:29 should be "end of poem" not "end of "poem title"",


FYI, Your silence is a little long at the end, try to get it around 5 seconds, not 6.

Thanks,

M
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All three sections are PL OK.

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M
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I'll take:
11 - Hurrah for Cooper & Cray
13- Roll on time, Roll on
23- Little Henry
And verily did the chains fall off all manner of things which sorely needed chaining.
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eringrassie wrote: January 1st, 2022, 8:08 pm I'll take:
11 - Hurrah for Cooper & Cray
13- Roll on time, Roll on
23- Little Henry
Thank you Erin

I look forward to your readings.

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Here is section 29, at 2:14

https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/sentimentalsongbook_29_moore_128kb.mp3


Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

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Question on Roll on Time (p. 34) as prep it - adding in the chorus bits to a word file. Do you think the chorus is:

Roll on time, roll on, it can never turn back
To the time of my maiden days —
To the time of my youth it can never turn back
When I wandered with my love, bright and gay.

or
Roll on time, roll on, it can never turn back
To the time of my maiden days —
To the time of my youth it can never turn back
When I wandered with my love, bright and gay.
I was happy then as a girl could ever be.
And live on this earth here below —
I was happy as a lark and as busy as a bee,
For in fashion or in style I did not go.

The longer one seems to make more sense, repeating the line about fashion. What's your take?
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I think that the chorus is the four line version, as all the other verses are four lines in length.
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