[Red Herring Argument] Industrialists old and new have become very wealthy by shaving seconds off repetitive processes. [Apposite Argument] Over the course of a multi-chapter book, this could represent a significant listening time saving, while still conveying the same information.
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It is also less precise. It does not directly imply that this recording you're listening to is a LV recording too.paullawleyjones wrote: ↑December 22nd, 2021, 1:29 am It removes the repetition of "...is a Librivox recording. All Librivox recordings..." It is more concise, which, for me, is better.
"This recording (whatever it is and wherever it may come from), and all Librivox recordings (which you can find elsewhere...) are in the public domain."
It's like saying "My car, and all great sports cars, are red."
This does not mean that your car is a great sports car too.
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There is a mistake in my OP; it should read "This, and all Librivox recordings, is in the public domain..."Availle wrote: ↑December 22nd, 2021, 1:38 amIt does not directly imply that this recording you're listening to is a LV recording too.paullawleyjones wrote: ↑December 22nd, 2021, 1:29 am It removes the repetition of "...is a Librivox recording. All Librivox recordings..." It is more concise, which, for me, is better.
"This recording (whatever it is and wherever it may come from), and all Librivox recordings (which you can find elsewhere...) are in the public domain."
It's like saying "My car, and all great sports cars, are red." This does not mean that your car is a great sports car too.
It doesn't directly state that this is a Librivox recording (or that your car is a great sports car, too,) but it does strongly imply so by association, else why write the sentence like that?
Paul Lawley-Jones
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"There is nothing enlightened about shrinking so that other people won’t feel insecure around you." – Bene Gesserit "Litany of Fear," Dune
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"There is nothing enlightened about shrinking so that other people won’t feel insecure around you." – Bene Gesserit "Litany of Fear," Dune
Even with your change, it's still the same issue that Ava brings up. I believe many problems arise when statements "imply" something, or one would "infer" something, that is not actually stated. The implication that you receive may be totally different than what I get. Ava's example of the red car more clearly highlights the problem (as I actually have red car which is not a sports car ). In some cases implications and inferences are made to obfuscate the real truth of a matter.paullawleyjones wrote: ↑December 22nd, 2021, 2:04 am There is a mistake in my OP; it should read "This, and all Librivox recordings, is in the public domain..."
It doesn't directly state that this is a Librivox recording (or that your car is a great sports car, too,) but it does strongly imply so by association, else why write the sentence like that?
I believe it always better to clearly state something, rather than leave it subject to misinterpretation. The intro does that, IMHO.
FWIW,
Don (DACSoft)
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Two College Friends; Baseball Joe Around the World