[COMPLETE][Psychology]Nerves And Common Sense by Annie Payson Call - kit
hi I hope all is well with you. Could you maybe give me a short status update please ?
Oh and have you seen our March challenge ? (see my signature) Maybe it will inspire you to record another section or two for this project as well
Hope to see you around soon
Sonia
Oh and have you seen our March challenge ? (see my signature) Maybe it will inspire you to record another section or two for this project as well
Hope to see you around soon
Sonia
yay, I'm happy you are back with another chapter
And this is such an eerie coincidence just now This morning I PLed practically the same topic/chapter in the other Annie Payson Call solo I am also DPLing. It was not word for word the same, but it was both time explaining about restful working. Strange.
Ok, on the whole it's excellently narrated, but I have a few notes to correct or at least suggest:
> at 9:42: "Character grows with practice" – you say "patience"
> from 12:15 to 2:17: between "following questions" and "what do I resist" – the pause feels too long, I would cut quite a bit here
> at 2:17: "One" – Maybe it wouldn't be bad to add the numbers at the beginning as well, like in the book. It shows better when a new question/idea starts, and then you don't have to leave so much silence between
> at 12:33: "Two" - same
> at 12:37: "Three" - same
> at 12:45: "Four" - same
> at 12:58: "Five" - same
> from 13:28 to 13:31: between "into daily practice" and "end of section 11" – the pause is also very long here, I always recommend staying under 2 seconds, even between paragraphs
thanks !
Sonia
Awesome! Thank you for PLing.
Will fix these and get back to you.
I took a long break with reading and need some nuts and bolts...lol
Thank you for the suggestions. I always wondered about the numbers. Now it makes sense.
What is the other book with the same author? Guess I can read it at my leisure time.
Happy Thanksgiving!
-Scientila
Will fix these and get back to you.
I took a long break with reading and need some nuts and bolts...lol
Thank you for the suggestions. I always wondered about the numbers. Now it makes sense.
What is the other book with the same author? Guess I can read it at my leisure time.
Happy Thanksgiving!
-Scientila
This username is also my Gmail address.
viewtopic.php?f=12&t=89998 (now let's see who finishes first )
Happy Thanksgiving to you as well. Here it is not a holiday though.
Sonia