Hi there, thanks for this. I have nothing to correct in terms of the text itself, but just a few technical points:
1. The overall volume is much too low. It's averaging at 75.4dB - the acceptable range for LV is 86-92, so please amplify the whole recording by at least 11dB. 13dB or 14dB would be ideal.
2. I hear two sentences repeated, beginning "Early in September Major Jones" and ending "before winter set in". The first example is at 16:59 and you repeat it at 17:20. Just pick which you prefer and delete the other.
3. At the end of the recording I hear the introduction again - I'm guessing you recorded it at the end and copied it to the beginning, but forgot to delete it from the end? If you could just delete that from the end, and make sure at the end you say "end of Section 6" followed by 5 seconds silence.
The reading itself was great - thank you.