that was fast, thank you, Wayne and wonderfully narrated, all of them. I'm happy you liked the sections. The zeppelin raid sounds scary indeed.Kalamareader wrote: ↑April 2nd, 2021, 2:19 pmHere are my three:
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldstory15_07_dresser_128kb.mp3 6:12
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldstory15_08_dresser_128kb.mp3 3:07
https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/worldstory15_70_dresser_128kb.mp3 18:14
I have only a few PL notes, most of them cuts:
Section 7:
> at 0:35: "editor's intro" - this can get cut, simply read "the editor" after the intro, like it's in the book (which you did correctly). I only want an intro to the footnotes (see second post for details)
Section 8:
> at 0:08: could you please read the entire title like I wrote it down in the MW (see special notes in the second post): so after the intro, say all this: The World War, Part II. The gathering of the armies. Historical note
Section 70:
> at 0:36: "editor's intro" - can be cut again
> at 2:13: (p. 408) "104 were killed" - you say "1,004" which is a lot more
> at 14:58: (p. 415) "editor's note" - can also be cut, just read the text like in the book, since this is not a footnote
thank you !
Sonia