victorseremet wrote: ↑March 25th, 2021, 12:41 am
Here is Chapter 12 for PL.
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Any constuctive criticism is welcome.
Great reading, Victor, just a few stresses and little misreads in a difficult chapter!
Please don't overdo the stresses. Last time you stressed the corrections really hard, that was a little too much
@0:50 "сAльную", I hear "сальнУю"
@2:02 "он помОрщился", I hear "поморщИлся", and "он" is missing
@2:50 "мѣдную дОску", I hear "чугунную доскУ"
@2:55 "на грудИ", I hear "нА груди"
@5:15 "на грудИ", I hear "нА груди"
@5:25 "из грудИ", I hear "из грУди"
@5:30 "глАза", I hear "глазА"
@6:25 "ты их не повѣрЯлъ", I hear "ты... ты их не повѣрилъ" (a stumble and a different word)
@7:25 "отдЁрнула", I hear "отдернУла"
@7:43 "вЫбѣжали", I hear "выбѣжАли"
Pleasure to listen, again