I really enjoy listening to all that was going through the lives and minds of the Founding Fathers. Thanks for making it accessible to many more people.
Here are a few things that need a little attention:
3:15
the consequence of which was a scene of confusion & distress for the space of seventeen months, You said
sense
3:35
and at the very time when the interposition of the civil magistrate You said
interpretation
4:12
are compelled to submit to as great a military power as administration shall please to order to be posted among them in a time of profound peace, I heard
line
~9:05 There is a very long pause which could be shortened to good effect.
9:21.5
4th Geo. 3 chap. 15, You should probably read this. This is how to read it:
Fourth year of the reign of George the third, Chapter 15:
9:56.75
in the court of At the end of this, it sounds like you start to say the word “exchequer”, but stumble a little. I think it would be a very easy 'clip' at the end of that phrase to clean it up.
10:15.5
& which cannot be too often repeated; You said
repealed
10:33 Another long pause
10:35
These are some of the insupportable grievances which this province has long been laboring under I can't really make out what the first word is, but I don't think it is
These.
11:03
will be still increased. Left out the word
'be'
11:11 Again you left out the reference. As we are supposed to read everything in the text, this should also be read.
7 Geo.3.2 This would be read
'Seventh year of the reign of George the third'. The “2” at the end refers to the footnote at the end of the section.
14:46 Another long pause
Keep up the good work. This whole process isn't as easy as it looks at first blush.
Wayne
Don't know what mental block I have against this! Let's hope this is correct (it LOOKS correct).