Kitty wrote: ↑February 8th, 2021, 6:32 am
thank you Francesca for this lovely reading of quite an interesting short story. It was very easy to understand and you did not read too fast.
Already looking forward to hearing more from you, so I hope you liked the recording process.
Before this can be marked ok though, there are a few small corrections to be made. No worries, you
do NOT have to re-record it all. This is too much work (for both of us). Only check out the time spot that I tell you in my notes and make a few cuts of repeats and insert a few bits. If you need a tutorial on how to edit, please don't hesitate to ask.
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at 0:02: please also include the language "
letto in Italiano di Francesca..." between title and LV disclaimer. If you say your name here, you can cut it later at 0:15.
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at 0:18-0:21: "
Novelle rusticane, di Giovanni Verga" – this
can get cut, we don't include the title of the compilation, only the name of the text that you are actually reading
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at 11:36: (p. 81) stumble and repeat: "confermava
col capo, curva al pari..." – underlined part can be cut once
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at 18:37: (p. 86) stumble and repeat: "ascoltavano
la cantilena lunga dei mietiori" – underlined part can be cut once
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at 19:27: (p. 86) stumble and repeat: "immobili
al cascare del vento" – I hear "
alle cascate al vento"
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at 20:47: (p. 87) stumble and repeat: "si ridusse
à cercare impiego" – can be cut once
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at 22:18: you need to add the
end disclaimer: "
Fine di Malaria, di Giovanni Verga" right before "registrazione die Francesca Roma"
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at the end we always leave a
standard of 5 seconds of silence, you have only a bit over 1 second. Please
add 4 seconds of silence
> and since you reupload anyway, please also use the correct filenaming system:
msw028_malaria_verga_fr_128kb
thank you, and congrats on your first official recording for LV
Sonia