Complete [Politics/Philosophy]Enquiry Concerning Political Justice Vol.2- William Godwin-ag

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Section 17 Object of War
Well done! PL OK.

Section 32 National Education
PL Notes:
4:08 Heard something like "second notion" it's slightly garbled.
s/b "second DOCTRINE"

5:25.5 Heard "Asterisk ........." the sign of a footnote
More common is to say "Footnote...." then "End Footnote" after it has been read. You should check with Amy about this. It happened in the following section too.

Just two easy fixes needed. thanks.
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Arden wrote: ↑February 13th, 2021, 6:27 pm 33 up at 16:43. Thanks! :)

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/enquiry2_33_godwin_128kb.mp3
Section 33 PL Notes
2:20.5 heard "Asterisk" again. See PL note for section 32.

6:02 Repeat "to the.... to the inducements to the accepting the office.

6:55 "asterisk....." again, see above

You're cutting a wide swath thru these sections... Great!
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Arden wrote: ↑February 13th, 2021, 6:27 pm 33 up at 16:43. Thanks! :)

https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/enquiry2_33_godwin_128kb.mp3
Thanks, Arden!
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williamjones wrote: ↑February 13th, 2021, 9:21 pm


5:25.5 Heard "Asterisk ........." the sign of a footnote
More common is to say "Footnote...." then "End Footnote" after it has been read. You should check with Amy about this. It happened in the following section too.
I agree with saying "Footnote"..."End Footnote."
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Hello!
May I have sections 35 and 36?
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Anautumnous wrote: ↑February 15th, 2021, 11:27 pm Hello!
May I have sections 35 and 36?
Hi,
You sure can.
Thank!
-Amy
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https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/lownquiry2_26_godwin_128kb.mp3
Section 26 submitted at 9:35. Thanks!
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gruneyjimbo wrote: ↑February 18th, 2021, 7:09 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/lownquiry2_26_godwin_128kb.mp3
Section 26 submitted at 9:35. Thanks!
J Grunfelder
Thank you, J!
-Amy :)
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gruneyjimbo wrote: ↑February 18th, 2021, 7:09 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/lownquiry2_26_godwin_128kb.mp3
Section 26 submitted at 9:35. Thanks!
J Grunfelder
PLnotes for Section 26
Good morning JG. This is the first of your recordings I've PLed and I am very much impressed. I found only two missteps, the first one significant and the other one a "reader's choice" bit of picky-ness.

Bad file name: lownquiry2_26_godwin_128kb.mp3
s/b enquiry_26......

4:50.5 "employ themselves in a casuistry"
Heard "Cows-us-tree" (3 syllables)
s/b "Cuh-ZOO-iss-tree" (4 syllables) This is me being really picky! But, if I had not had the text in front of my eyes, I couldn't have guessed what the written word was. So, even tho I'm being picky, I thought I'd bring it to your attention. Maybe you want to change, it, maybe not.

You'll need to change the name of the file and upload it again whether or not you make the pronunciation change.

I look forward to hearing more of your readings.
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Considering Godwin's vocabulary and syntax, I think it's possible that there was a motto-plaque on his office door:
"I write not for the Many
but for the Few."
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williamjones wrote: ↑February 19th, 2021, 5:33 am Considering Godwin's vocabulary and syntax, I think it's possible that there was a motto-plaque on his office door:
"I write not for the Many
but for the Few."
Haha!
I think that is my motto, too. But I wish I had his intellect and vocabulary.
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https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/enquiry2_15_godwin_128kb.mp3

Section 15 submited, at 34:09 :D
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May I try Sections 41, 42, and 43?
Jim D.

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Jddykst wrote: ↑February 22nd, 2021, 6:05 pm May I try Sections 41, 42, and 43?
Thank you for Section 15, Jim. Sections 41, 42, and 43 are all yours.
Thanks!
-Amy :D
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https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/enquiry2_26_godwin_128kb.mp3

Submitted at 9:36. Thanks for the pointers! Always getting better :)
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