Sorry for the delay. Had a busy week. Nice work with the many German names and a few Latin phrases! Since you were interested in pronunciation problems, I noted all the issues that interfered with comprehension.
(2:02) p. 154, I hear "inaptability" instead of "inadaptability"
(6:01) I hear "normally" instead of "nominally"
(7:02) I hear "no proof" instead of "not proof" (proof = able to withstand)
(10:04) p. 156 I hear "The deputies of the town" instead of "towns"
(10:50) p. 157 I hear "authority" instead of "autonomy", subtle but significant change of meaning
(13:14) I hear "juridicature" instead of "judicature"
(16:23) I hear "naturalized" instead of "neutralized"
(16:24) Placing the stress on the second syllable of "impotence" instead of the first makes it sound like "importance", which nearly reverses the meaning
(20:58) p. 159 I hear "the friar extracted" instead of "friars"
(21:54) Missing sentence: "So while the Princes... the cities."
(25:04) p. 160 Missing phrase "in east Friesland"
(30:41) p. 162 I hear something like "boolkwalk" instead of "bulwark"
(30:56) I hear "men's" instead of "men"
(30:57, 31:03) I hear "woman" instead of "women" (pronounced "wimen")
(30:19) p. 163 I hear "professly" (which my ear would approximate to "purposely") instead of "professedly"
(33:23) confusing stress in "impotence"
(33:46) I hear "appelling" instead of "appalling" (a-PAUL-ing)
(34:06) confusing stress in "impotence"
(34:43) I hear "these assault" instead of "those assaults" (which changes the meaning to "the assault(s) just mentioned" from "the assaults which...")
You don't have to change all of these, but let me know which ones you change (or don't) for spot PL.
At the end, please add "end of section 18".
Additionally, I heard "Lutherian" instead of Lutheran in several places. It sounds like a word that might exist, and it's clear enough what it would have meant, so just for the future.
Also for the future, the first syllable in "archbishop" rhymes with "march" (still easy to understand, because it's pronounced "ark" in "archangel")
Thanks!
Michael