If you need me to change anything, please let me know. I am practicing to audition to narrate audiobooks, so any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated. Thanks so much!
Thank you! There is one thing to be fixed. @0:23 you got part of the intro a little mixed up. You put "Section 41" at the start of the section that should go like this: "G.K. Chesterton's Newspaper Columns: The New Witness - 1922, by G. K. Chesterton. Section 41".
As for constructive criticism, I would recommend leaving a little bit more time between sentences. Also, watch out for loud breaths. You don't want to take the breathing away, as then you might sound dead , but perhaps deamplfying some of the breaths, or watching out for where you are taking breaths might help.
I hope that helps! You have a lovely voice and did a very nice job! I would just watch out on the pacing/timing, etc.
So sorry! Just saw this. I will rerecord the whole thing today. Nothing like feedback and revision to get better!
If you need me to change anything, please let me know. I am practicing to audition to narrate audiobooks, so any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated. Thanks so much!
Thank you! There is one thing to be fixed. @0:23 you got part of the intro a little mixed up. You put "Section 41" at the start of the section that should go like this: "G.K. Chesterton's Newspaper Columns: The New Witness - 1922, by G. K. Chesterton. Section 41".
As for constructive criticism, I would recommend leaving a little bit more time between sentences. Also, watch out for loud breaths. You don't want to take the breathing away, as then you might sound dead , but perhaps deamplfying some of the breaths, or watching out for where you are taking breaths might help.
I hope that helps! You have a lovely voice and did a very nice job! I would just watch out on the pacing/timing, etc.
So sorry! Just saw this. I will rerecord the whole thing today. Nothing like feedback and revision to get better!
- Stacy
Hi Stacy,
No need to re-record the entire thing! Just the intro mixup needs to be fixed! The rest I only gave for future reference because you asked for constructive criticism.
Thank you! There is one thing to be fixed. @0:23 you got part of the intro a little mixed up. You put "Section 41" at the start of the section that should go like this: "G.K. Chesterton's Newspaper Columns: The New Witness - 1922, by G. K. Chesterton. Section 41".
As for constructive criticism, I would recommend leaving a little bit more time between sentences. Also, watch out for loud breaths. You don't want to take the breathing away, as then you might sound dead , but perhaps deamplfying some of the breaths, or watching out for where you are taking breaths might help.
I hope that helps! You have a lovely voice and did a very nice job! I would just watch out on the pacing/timing, etc.
So sorry! Just saw this. I will rerecord the whole thing today. Nothing like feedback and revision to get better!
- Stacy
Hi Stacy,
No need to re-record the entire thing! Just the intro mixup needs to be fixed! The rest I only gave for future reference because you asked for constructive criticism.
No, I wanted to and already did it. Seriously, I'm trying to listen to myself and improve and record something every day. Do let me know if this one sounds better. And thank you again for the feedback. I'll take more if you have it!
sdwilcox wrote: ↑February 5th, 2021, 10:49 am
No, I wanted to and already did it. Seriously, I'm trying to listen to myself and improve and record something every day. Do let me know if this one sounds better. And thank you again for the feedback. I'll take more if you have it!
, but perhaps deamplfying some of the breaths, or watching out for where you are taking breaths might help.
It is PL OK!