COMPLETE - [SOLO] Jewish Fairy Tales and Fables by Aunt Naomi - lny

NoelBadrian · Post by **NoelBadrian** » December 30th, 2020, 7:31 am

Hi,
Section 5 is ready for listening.
Noel

NoelBadrian · Post by **NoelBadrian** » January 2nd, 2021, 6:16 am

Well, here we are in the New Year - please to goodness it will be kind to us all.
Section 6 is a nice one to start with I think - it is ready for PL
Best Wishes,
Noel

Lmnei · Post by **Lmnei** » January 4th, 2021, 5:40 pm

Hi Noel!

Best of the New Year to you too!

Section 5 and 6 are PL OK! Section 6 made me laugh as coconuts HURT when they fall and hit you! I have had experience with this in Maui...

Lynda

NoelBadrian · Post by **NoelBadrian** » January 13th, 2021, 9:36 am

I think that you will like this one!
Section 7 is ready for PL.
Noel

NoelBadrian · Post by **NoelBadrian** » January 19th, 2021, 10:25 am

Hi,
Section 8 is now ready for PL.
Noel

Lmnei · Post by **Lmnei** » January 19th, 2021, 10:43 am

Hi Noel!

Sorry I have not gotten back to you on Section 7 - been setting up and running a large Estate sale for my friend and her parents (2 households) and just did not have the time as I have been so exhausted every night and only could eat, sleep and sell!

TODAY I will listen to both of them!

Lynda

NoelBadrian · Post by **NoelBadrian** » January 20th, 2021, 5:25 am

Hi Lynda,
Please take care of yourself! The recordings can wait, I am in no hurry.
Regards,
Noel

NoelBadrian · Post by **NoelBadrian** » January 27th, 2021, 8:00 am

Hi,
Section 9 is ready for listening.
Noel

Lmnei · Post by **Lmnei** » January 30th, 2021, 6:00 pm

Hi Noel!

I have recovered from my trip to the USA now - here is your feedback. It is really picky - feel free to just tell me to mark these PL OK if you do not want to do these edits. They do not change the story that much. I just know that you like to have things correct!

Section 7
3:59 – said "monarch of all the things on earth" should be "monarch of all living things on earth"
7:22 – said "owing to it’s giddiness" should be just "owing to giddiness"
11:45 – said "thy majesty" should be "your majesty"

Section 8
15:51 – said "back at the point" instead of "back at the spot"

Section 9
3:10 – text says "have you NOT carried out" – missing NOT

Lynda

NoelBadrian · Post by **NoelBadrian** » February 1st, 2021, 8:47 am

Lmnei wrote: ↑January 30th, 2021, 6:00 pm Hi Noel!

I have recovered from my trip to the USA now - here is your feedback. It is really picky - feel free to just tell me to mark these PL OK if you do not want to do these edits. They do not change the story that much. I just know that you like to have things correct!

Section 7
3:59 – said "monarch of all the things on earth" should be "monarch of all living things on earth"
7:22 – said "owing to it’s giddiness" should be just "owing to giddiness"
11:45 – said "thy majesty" should be "your majesty"

Section 8
15:51 – said "back at the point" instead of "back at the spot"

Section 9
3:10 – text says "have you NOT carried out" – missing NOT

Lynda

Thanks Lynda,
All corrections completed and ready to be checked!
Noel

Lmnei · Post by **Lmnei** » February 2nd, 2021, 6:53 am

You do such beautiful work Noel!

All these edits are PL OK!

Lynda

NoelBadrian · Post by **NoelBadrian** » February 16th, 2021, 9:07 am

Thanks Lynda,
Section 10 is ready for your attention now.
Noel

Lmnei · Post by **Lmnei** » February 21st, 2021, 9:32 am

Hi Noel!

That was a very interesting story!

Just one thing to correct:

13:10 – two repeats – starting at 13:15 the text is fine

Lynda

NoelBadrian · Post by **NoelBadrian** » February 22nd, 2021, 5:07 am

Lmnei wrote: ↑February 21st, 2021, 9:32 am Hi Noel!

That was a very interesting story!

Just one thing to correct:

13:10 – two repeats – starting at 13:15 the text is fine

Lynda

Thanks Lynda .. must have dozed off listening to myself while editing again!
Fixed and awaiting spot check. Noel

Lmnei · Post by **Lmnei** » February 22nd, 2021, 5:45 am

And Section 10 is now PL OK!

Wonderful edit Noel!

Lynda