COMPLETE[PLAY]The Perjur'd Husband by Centlivre - thw

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Post by ToddHW » January 3rd, 2021, 10:01 am

And Act 4 is also ready.

Thanks, Todd

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Post by Kitty » January 3rd, 2021, 11:48 am

TheIntern356 wrote:
January 3rd, 2021, 7:56 am
And there we go :)
Stage Directions Act 1: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/perjurdhusband_stagedirections_1_128kb.mp3
9:31.27
thank you, all good and PL ok now. You've mastered your first stage directions :clap:

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Post by Kitty » January 6th, 2021, 2:34 am

ToddHW wrote:
January 3rd, 2021, 9:08 am
Act 2 is ready. Have the cold shower waiting....
:lol: I was curious about that seduction scene...it sounds wonderfully steamy indeed. And the other two dialogues (Alonzo/Bassino and Lucy/Pizalto) are also very entertaining. I enjoyed the whole act very much.

Now I need breakfast after this...

Oh there is a bit of a mix up at the end, which needs to be corrected:

> at 21:15: you forgot "Alonzo, aside" right before "then I am happy". I'm sure he would not say this aloud to the remark done by Bassino that his misfortunes are in Turin.

> at 21:32: after "exit Alonzo" - this "aside" can be cut here, no need to speak as aside since he is alone in the room at this point. Maybe this aside was the one that was missing right before and you put it on the wrong spot by mistake :hmm:

> at 21:40: missed line: "exit Bassino"

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Post by Kitty » January 6th, 2021, 3:04 am

ToddHW wrote:
January 3rd, 2021, 10:01 am
And Act 4 is also ready.
ok I was too curious still, so breakfast had to wait...

A wonderful act as well, a bit more dramatic still than the previous one. The scene with Placentia and Alonzo and Bassino is great and then the almost slapstick scene with the crossdressing lover is a comic relief somehow.

Wonderfully edited again, thank you Todd !

Just one small correction to suggest:

> at 7:41: "Bassino, aside" - I think we need to include the "aside" already at the beginning. Bassino would surely make no mention of his hypocrisy aloud :shock:

> at 7:48: so here "aside" can get cut

thanks (and now definitely breakfast...)

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Post by ToddHW » January 6th, 2021, 7:16 am

Changes to both acts made as suggested; ready for spot PL.

Thanks!

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Post by Kitty » January 6th, 2021, 10:26 am

ToddHW wrote:
January 6th, 2021, 7:16 am
Changes to both acts made as suggested; ready for spot PL.
thank you and now PL ok :clap:

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Post by jennlea » January 10th, 2021, 7:52 am

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Post by Kitty » January 11th, 2021, 7:53 am

jennlea wrote:
January 10th, 2021, 7:52 am
Here is Act 1 of Aurelia:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/perjurdhusband_aurelia_1_128kb.mp3
high dramatic, big emotions. if Aurelia is like this in the first act, I dread how she will escalate in the final acts :lol: excellently done, Jenn, thanks ! Straight PL ok.

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Post by jennlea » January 12th, 2021, 6:00 pm

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Post by Kitty » January 13th, 2021, 3:01 am

I always find it amazing how long the people still speak on stage after they have been stabbed to death :lol: you had a great dying scene here, excellently done, Jen :)

Act 3 is PL ok.

One missed bit for Act 5 though:

> at 0:10: "How tedious are thy minutes when cruel absence parts"

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Post by jennlea » January 13th, 2021, 6:46 am

Kitty wrote:
January 13th, 2021, 3:01 am
I always find it amazing how long the people still speak on stage after they have been stabbed to death :lol: you had a great dying scene here, excellently done, Jen :)

Act 3 is PL ok.

One missed bit for Act 5 though:

> at 0:10: "How tedious are thy minutes when cruel absence parts"
Thanks, Sonia! Funny story, I already had to re-record that line in Act 5 because while editing I discovered I said 'absent' instead of 'absence'. Apparently I then left out the first part of that line :lol:

Oh well! Should be fixed now. I actually had the first half of the line still in the original recording so I just stitched it together. Let me know if it isn't a smooth join.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/perjurdhusband_aurelia_5_128kb.mp3
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Post by Kitty » January 13th, 2021, 7:32 am

jennlea wrote:
January 13th, 2021, 6:46 am
I actually had the first half of the line still in the original recording so I just stitched it together. Let me know if it isn't a smooth join.
it sounds absolutely smooth and perfect. PL ok, thanks

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Post by jennlea » January 13th, 2021, 8:01 am

Kitty wrote:
January 13th, 2021, 7:32 am
it sounds absolutely smooth and perfect. PL ok, thanks
Wonderful! Thank you!
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