mightyfelix wrote: ↑December 30th, 2020, 7:12 pm
Thank you! Well, first things first. Here is your catalogue page, with your name displayed as you've requested:
https://librivox.org/reader/15507 You can get to this page by clicking your name in the MW of any project you're signed up for. It will display every project you've read for, both completed and in-progress. (Right now, of course, it's just this one, but that will change as you get involved in more projects.)
Now, for the PL. Although you only have one medium-sized line, I thought you did very well with it! In fact, I hadn't really read this line before, but just skimmed over it. I think it's actually a pretty funny line, now that I get a good look at (and listen to) it!
I am going to ask for a couple of small changes. Nothing too major, but hopefully this will help you on other projects as well.
At the beginning, it's best to leave about 0.5-1 second of silence before you begin speaking, just so that nothing is accidentally cut off. (You don't have to address that here, but keep it in mind for the future.)
When you give your voice credit, there's no need to say "Role of," and in fact, it could even be a bit intrusive. For this, and pretty much all (unless I'm forgetting something) dramatic projects, you should just say "[Character name], read by [Reader name]." All these voice credits are eventually going to be strung together as our cast list, and it would be redundant for everyone to say "role of." Will you redo that credit, please?
0:51 And lastly, this won't apply to every script, but sometimes you have to keep your eyes peeled for "All" lines. There is one here, on page 150. All the workmen: "The Sultan, with his son-in-law!" Add this line on the end, and you're golden!
And yes, of course you may read another role! As long as it isn't in act 6, you can take your pick out of the roles that are still open. Which one(s) would you like?
There are some especially humorous lines in there, and you made the most of them all! Just a couple of corrections to make.
But everything is nearby, and it will be easy for me to slot it all into the right place when I edit. So, I get to mark it PL ok and move it down with the other completed files! (I don't know if you guys understand how much of a thrill I get out of that. I know, I know. I need to get out more. 
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Congrats!