COMPLETE[Play]Armand;or The Peer and the Peasant by Mowatt - thw

Post by **Rapunzelina** » January 5th, 2021, 12:23 pm

Blanche, Act IV, there's a repetition around 3:52 "Let me not" (page 45), but I think it can be fixed by the editor when assembling the file.

Blanche, Act V, a missing phrase around 2:27, here in bold "by passions vile unkinged! Thy words Have scorched my brain, and should have seared thy lips In passing them." (page 54).
An extra word around 3:04, here in bold "the unshorn locks of the Nazarene", text is "the unshorn locks the Nazarene Vowed to his God" (page 55)

ktaylor07 · Post by **ktaylor07** » January 5th, 2021, 1:54 pm

jennlea wrote: ↑January 5th, 2021, 11:37 am And here are Acts 4 and 5 of Blanche:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/armand_blanche_4_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/armand_blanche_5_128kb.mp3

Hooray! Hooray!

Just edited in your parts of Act III -- So nicely done! Blanche sounds so sweet and innocent. Yet, when push comes to shove, she has a lot of spirit!

jennlea · Post by **jennlea** » January 6th, 2021, 6:17 am

Rapunzelina wrote: ↑January 5th, 2021, 12:23 pm Blanche, Act IV, there's a repetition around 3:52 "Let me not" (page 45), but I think it can be fixed by the editor when assembling the file.

Blanche, Act V, a missing phrase around 2:27, here in bold "by passions vile unkinged! Thy words Have scorched my brain, and should have seared thy lips In passing them." (page 54).
An extra word around 3:04, here in bold "the unshorn locks of the Nazarene", text is "the unshorn locks the Nazarene Vowed to his God" (page 55)

I went ahead and edited out the repetition in Act 4 and also both corrections in Act 5. Thank you for listening and helping me get my lines in order

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/armand_blanche_4_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/armand_blanche_5_128kb.mp3

jennlea · Post by **jennlea** » January 6th, 2021, 6:18 am

ktaylor07 wrote: ↑January 5th, 2021, 1:54 pm Hooray! Hooray!
Just edited in your parts of Act III -- So nicely done! Blanche sounds so sweet and innocent. Yet, when push comes to shove, she has a lot of spirit!

Thank you

I can't wait to listen to this when it is finished!!

Post by **Rapunzelina** » January 6th, 2021, 6:51 am

jennlea wrote: ↑January 6th, 2021, 6:17 am Thank you for listening and helping me get my lines in order

You're welcome! Yes, all perfect and in order now!

ktaylor07 · Post by **ktaylor07** » January 7th, 2021, 2:42 pm

EltonTheSnowman wrote: ↑November 28th, 2020, 9:18 am Victor, ready for PL:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/armand_victor_1_128kb.mp3
(0:57)

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/armand_victor_3_128kb.mp3
(3:47)

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/armand_victor_4_128kb.mp3
(1:40)

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/armand_victor_5_128kb.mp3
(0:10)

I'm editing together Act I and have discovered that we're missing a line from Victor. It's at the top of page 11. Should be at around 46.0 on your recording -- "In a word, his Majesty is charmed with this piece of incarnate loveliness, -- we may say charmed."

benderca · Post by **benderca** » January 7th, 2021, 4:07 pm

Here's Jaqueline, Act 2:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/armand_jaqueline_2_128kb.mp3

(for the voice credit, I added "Dame Babette's daughter" -- I noticed that Kelly pronounces Dame with a long "a" and Wayne with a French "a". I remember there was a discussion on this way back when, but I can't remember what was decided, so I did both.

).

Jaqueline, Act 3:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/armand_jaqueline_3_128kb.mp3

Jaqueline, Act 4:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/armand_jaqueline_4_128kb.mp3

Jaqueline, Act 5:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/armand_jaqueline_5_128kb.mp3

ktaylor07 · Post by **ktaylor07** » January 8th, 2021, 6:34 am

benderca wrote: ↑January 7th, 2021, 4:07 pm Here's Jaqueline, Act 2:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/armand_jaqueline_2_128kb.mp3

(for the voice credit, I added "Dame Babette's daughter" -- I noticed that Kelly pronounces Dame with a long "a" and Wayne with a French "a". I remember there was a discussion on this way back when, but I can't remember what was decided, so I did both. ).

Jaqueline, Act 3:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/armand_jaqueline_3_128kb.mp3

Jaqueline, Act 4:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/armand_jaqueline_4_128kb.mp3

Jaqueline, Act 5:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/armand_jaqueline_5_128kb.mp3

Hooray! Hooray!

EltonTheSnowman · Post by **EltonTheSnowman** » January 8th, 2021, 6:42 am

ktaylor07 wrote: ↑January 7th, 2021, 2:42 pm
I'm editing together Act I and have discovered that we're missing a line from Victor. It's at the top of page 11. Should be at around 46.0 on your recording -- "In a word, his Majesty is charmed with this piece of incarnate loveliness, -- we may say charmed."

Oh dear, I always miss a line when it gets interrupted by stage directions in a new row.

Here's the corrected version:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/armand_victor_1_128kb.mp3
(1:10)

ktaylor07 · Post by **ktaylor07** » January 8th, 2021, 8:06 am

EltonTheSnowman wrote: ↑January 8th, 2021, 6:42 am
ktaylor07 wrote: ↑January 7th, 2021, 2:42 pm
I'm editing together Act I and have discovered that we're missing a line from Victor. It's at the top of page 11. Should be at around 46.0 on your recording -- "In a word, his Majesty is charmed with this piece of incarnate loveliness, -- we may say charmed."
Oh dear, I always miss a line when it gets interrupted by stage directions in a new row. Here's the corrected version:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/armand_victor_1_128kb.mp3
(1:10)

Me too! Thanks!!