COMPLETE[PLAY]The Perjur'd Husband by Centlivre - thw

Post by **Kitty** » January 1st, 2021, 8:11 am

ToddHW wrote: ↑December 31st, 2020, 10:40 amI was feeling servile for this play, and my four servantish parts are in the MW for PL.

that was a quickie, but I noticed you took care to make them all sound a bit distinct

excellent and PL ok for all of them, thanks

Sonia

Post by **ToddHW** » January 1st, 2021, 8:19 am

My pleasure ma'am. Will there be anything else, m'lady?

Thanks, Todd

TheIntern356 · Post by **TheIntern356** » January 1st, 2021, 12:09 pm

Act 1 Stage Directions: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/perjurdhusband_stagedirections_1_128kb.mp3 10:11.21

Lots of stuff at the beginning I wasn't too sure so I read a lot that will probably be cut

Post by **ToddHW** » January 1st, 2021, 3:10 pm

Thank you.

Todd

MManolakes · Post by **MManolakes** » January 1st, 2021, 4:02 pm

Bassino, Act 5, duration 5:03

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/perjurdhusband_bassino_5_128kb.mp3

Mike

Post by **ToddHW** » January 1st, 2021, 5:44 pm

Thank you.

Todd

Post by **Kitty** » January 3rd, 2021, 2:57 am

TheIntern356 wrote: ↑January 1st, 2021, 12:09 pmAct 1 Stage Directions: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/perjurdhusband_stagedirections_1_128kb.mp3 10:11.21
Lots of stuff at the beginning I wasn't too sure so I read a lot that will probably be cut

excellent job, and I agree, it's easier to cut later on than to insert, so you did well. But indeed we don't include the editor's data at the beginning, so that can be cut. But it was a good thought.

You did brilliantly with the cast list

thank you so much.

So here are only two notes to edit:

> from 0:47-1:23: the editor's data indeed does not need to be included, you can cut everything from "drawn from the works" to "1741"

> at 8:56: "Florella, aside" - need to include the name here as the whole sentence is the aside

thank you for this meticulous care for detail, rarely did I have so little DPL work with a new reader in stage directions.

Sonia

Post by **Kitty** » January 3rd, 2021, 3:04 am

MManolakes wrote: ↑January 1st, 2021, 4:02 pmBassino, Act 5, duration 5:03
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/perjurdhusband_bassino_5_128kb.mp3

a highly dramatic ending here. You pulled out all the stops and really went over the top with the dramatic performance, especially when Bassino finds he killed his wife.

well acted out, Mike, extremely enjoyed it. I am looking forward to hearing this scene assembled.

And PL ok, thanks

Sonia

Post by **Kitty** » January 3rd, 2021, 3:06 am

I just saw that we have all the voices for Acts 2 and 4, so these could get finished already. Wow.

Sonia

Post by **ToddHW** » January 3rd, 2021, 5:05 am

And, you will also see that I did the assembly of those two acts yesterday. Just grooming before I turn them over to you for final PL!

(Do you really want to listen to them out of sequence from the other acts?)

Thanks, Todd

Post by **ToddHW** » January 3rd, 2021, 5:07 am

Let me also note that being able to assemble acts after only a month is wonderful.

So ye'all like this playwright? I have just prep'd another of hers ("The Busie Body") and will launch it in the near future.

Thanks, Todd

Post by **Kitty** » January 3rd, 2021, 7:30 am

ToddHW wrote: ↑January 3rd, 2021, 5:05 am (Do you really want to listen to them out of sequence from the other acts?)

yes as soon as you are ready you can give them to me. For me it's less stressful than getting them all together in the end, when I know everybody just waits for me to listen to finish up.

Thanks

Sonia

TheIntern356 · Post by **TheIntern356** » January 3rd, 2021, 7:56 am

Kitty wrote: ↑January 3rd, 2021, 2:57 am
So here are only two notes to edit:

And there we go

Stage Directions Act 1: https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/perjurdhusband_stagedirections_1_128kb.mp3
9:31.27

Post by **ToddHW** » January 3rd, 2021, 8:23 am

Thank you.

Todd

Post by **ToddHW** » January 3rd, 2021, 9:08 am

Act 2 is ready. Have the cold shower waiting....

Wonderful acting. Perfect, all of you!

Thanks, Todd