COMPLETE[GROUP]Henry the Fifth by the Reverend A. J. Church - thw

KevinS · Post by **KevinS** » December 1st, 2020, 5:25 pm

mleigh wrote: ↑December 1st, 2020, 5:14 pm Kevin,

I PL'd section 17 for you.

3 corrections

1:53 should read "other accounts speak of a fistula and pleurisy", sounds like "or accounts speak of a fistula in pleurisy" although the "fistula in pleurisy" sounded better today
9:28 you have "last" should be "late king"
11:51 you have an extra syllable in "sepulchrum" in "sepulchrum modicum". sounds like "sepulchurum"

Other than that everything sounded good.

M

Thank you so much for the great listen!

KevinS · Post by **KevinS** » December 5th, 2020, 7:19 pm

Ch. 4

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/henrythefifth_04_church_128kb.mp3 (22:11)

KevinS · Post by **KevinS** » December 17th, 2020, 6:25 pm

Ch. 2

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/henrythefifth_02_church_128kb.mp3 (24:52)

mleigh · Post by **mleigh** » December 21st, 2020, 5:53 pm

KevinS wrote: ↑December 5th, 2020, 7:19 pm Ch. 4

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/henrythefifth_04_church_128kb.mp3 (22:11)

Chapter 4 has a few issues with it.
1. There is a repeat of "chapter 4 the charges against prince henry". It is at both 0:16 and 0:20
2. You use "king" instead of "prince" twice.
at 14:51, you have "if the king was removed" and at 21:21 you have "the king had often". Both should read prince.

Otherwise, a great recording.

M

KevinS · Post by **KevinS** » December 21st, 2020, 6:20 pm

mleigh wrote: ↑December 21st, 2020, 5:53 pm
KevinS wrote: ↑December 5th, 2020, 7:19 pm Ch. 4

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/henrythefifth_04_church_128kb.mp3 (22:11)
Chapter 4 has a few issues with it.
1. There is a repeat of "chapter 4 the charges against prince henry". It is at both 0:16 and 0:20
2. You use "king" instead of "prince" twice.
at 14:51, you have "if the king was removed" and at 21:21 you have "the king had often". Both should read prince.

Otherwise, a great recording.

M

Thank you! (I have work to do clearly!)

mleigh · Post by **mleigh** » December 22nd, 2020, 5:42 pm

Chapter 1:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/henrythefifth_01_church_128kb.mp3
13:24

Chapter 12:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/henrythefifth_12_church_128kb.mp3
7:07

KevinS · Post by **KevinS** » December 22nd, 2020, 5:43 pm

mleigh wrote: ↑December 22nd, 2020, 5:42 pm Chapter 1:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/henrythefifth_01_church_128kb.mp3
13:24

Chapter 12:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/henrythefifth_12_church_128kb.mp3
7:07

Thank you!

mleigh · Post by **mleigh** » December 22nd, 2020, 6:15 pm

Chapter 2 is PL OK.

M

KevinS · Post by **KevinS** » December 22nd, 2020, 6:50 pm

mleigh wrote: ↑December 22nd, 2020, 6:15 pm Chapter 2 is PL OK.

M

Very sweet of you to PL. Thank you!

KevinS · Post by **KevinS** » December 26th, 2020, 8:48 pm

mleigh wrote: ↑December 22nd, 2020, 5:42 pm Chapter 1:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/henrythefifth_01_church_128kb.mp3
13:24

Chapter 12:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/henrythefifth_12_church_128kb.mp3
7:07

Wonderful job! Both sections PL OK!

KevinS · Post by **KevinS** » January 11th, 2021, 5:25 pm

Ch. 11

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/henrythefifth_11_church_128kb.mp3 (13:44)

mleigh · Post by **mleigh** » January 18th, 2021, 5:11 pm

Kevin -

Do you want me to PL chapter 11 for you?

M

KevinS · Post by **KevinS** » January 18th, 2021, 5:14 pm

mleigh wrote: ↑January 18th, 2021, 5:11 pm Kevin -

Do you want me to PL chapter 11 for you?

M

If you don't mind.

I'm a little worried that this project is going to turn into mostly a solo. I do appreciate your interest very much.

After seeing the kind-of-recent film "Henry V," I thought his real story should be told. Haha! Maybe not.

mleigh · Post by **mleigh** » January 24th, 2021, 7:14 pm

Results of PL for section 11:

around 12:58 and 13:13 - the word "Sigismund" sounds like "sisimund" in "The safe -conduct of Sigismund" and "blush of Sigismund", respectively.

Your call on whether you want to change that.

Other than that section 11 is perfectly PL Okay.

Thanks,

M

KevinS · Post by **KevinS** » January 24th, 2021, 7:22 pm

mleigh wrote: ↑January 24th, 2021, 7:14 pm Results of PL for section 11:

around 12:58 and 13:13 - the word "Sigismund" sounds like "sisimund" in "The safe -conduct of Sigismund" and "blush of Sigismund", respectively.

Your call on whether you want to change that.

Other than that section 11 is perfectly PL Okay.

Thanks,

M

Thank you! I will change it. (He would insist.)