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Post by victorseremet » November 30th, 2020, 11:40 pm

chulsky wrote:
November 30th, 2020, 5:35 pm
Hello Victor, here is the feedback. You don't have "a lot to learn," your reading is quite clear and is pleasure to listen. :thumbs:
I would make short pauses between sentences and direct speech by different characters, that could clarify the meaning, but I won't comment on specific instances.
The instances I am listing here are misplaced stresses. I realize they are difficult, and sometimes a little change in word forms, cases, etc. could push the stress to another syllable (like голОвкой vs. гОлову). If it is too tedious to fix them, just say so, and we could leave them as they are.
Here we go, the stressed vowels are capitalized:
0:07 Отрочество
1:20 рОдинка
1:45 рОзовенькими
1:50 Clementi (I hear Dementi)
2:00 крУжевом
2:45 голОвкой
3:10 and 3:45 слыхАл
4:30 гОлову
5:40 as Hanna clarified, please say "Конец второй главы"
Hello Mark,
Many thanks for your feedback and suggestions. This is very helpful to me.
I will redo the recording keeping in mind the stresses.

Thank you
Victor

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Post by chulsky » December 1st, 2020, 8:17 pm

Sec.1 is PL OK!
Thank you, Wolfgang!
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Post by chulsky » December 2nd, 2020, 8:57 am

chulsky wrote:
December 1st, 2020, 8:17 pm
Sec.1 is PL OK!
Thank you, Wolfgang!
Sorry, Wolfgang, I have to take it back.
Usually I do not comment on misplaced stresses, unless asked to, but let's not repeat it in the intro.
Please stress the first syllable, "Отрочество."
Thank you, and my apology for changing my mind. :(
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Post by victorseremet » December 7th, 2020, 1:30 am

Hello Mark,

Here is the second version of my recording implementing your suggestions.
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/detstvo_02_tolstoy_128kb.mp3
Duration: 5:47.87
Any constuctive criticism is welcome.

Thank you
Victor

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Post by HannaPonomarenko » December 7th, 2020, 2:32 am

Hi Victor!
Thank you)
Just a small note: we don't mention miliseconds indicating the duration so it is 5:47.

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Post by victorseremet » December 7th, 2020, 2:35 am

HannaPonomarenko wrote:
December 7th, 2020, 2:32 am
Just a small note: we don't mention miliseconds indicating the duration so it is 5:47.
Thank you, Hanna! :-)
I will keep this in mind.

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Post by chulsky » December 10th, 2020, 5:08 pm

victorseremet wrote:
December 7th, 2020, 1:30 am
Here is the second version of my recording implementing your suggestions.
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/detstvo_02_tolstoy_128kb.mp3 ...
Any constuctive criticism is welcome.
Thank you, Victor for the corrections, but some of the stresses are still not right.
Also there are two repetitions, at 3:30 and 3:50. I apologize if I missed them the first time
2:00 - крУжевом
2:45 - голОвкой
3:05 - слыхАл
3:30 - repeated "Надѣньте , Карлъ Иванычъ ... я вась спрашиваю , хорошо ли спали дѣти ? сказала maman"
3:50 - repeated "Постойте на минутку , Мими , сказала maman Марьѣ Ивановнѣ , съ улыбкой : — ничего не слышно"
5:30 - вОзгласы
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Post by Kazbek » December 10th, 2020, 7:29 pm

Здравствуйте! Можно 4-ю главу прочитать?

Миша

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Post by victorseremet » December 11th, 2020, 2:13 am

chulsky wrote:
December 10th, 2020, 5:08 pm
Thank you, Victor for the corrections, but some of the stresses are still not right.
Also there are two repetitions, at 3:30 and 3:50. I apologize if I missed them the first time
2:00 - крУжевом
2:45 - голОвкой
3:05 - слыхАл
3:30 - repeated "Надѣньте , Карлъ Иванычъ ... я вась спрашиваю , хорошо ли спали дѣти ? сказала maman"
3:50 - repeated "Постойте на минутку , Мими , сказала maman Марьѣ Ивановнѣ , съ улыбкой : — ничего не слышно"
5:30 - вОзгласы
Hi Mark,
Thank you for your corrections.
I deleted the redundant phrases. Also, I re-recorded and replaced the wrong stressed words.

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/detstvo_02_tolstoy_128kb.mp3
The new duration is: 5:36

Thank you,
Victor

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Post by HannaPonomarenko » December 11th, 2020, 2:29 am

Kazbek wrote:
December 10th, 2020, 7:29 pm
Здравствуйте! Можно 4-ю главу прочитать?

Миша
Здраствуйте, Миша! Конечно) Записала на Вас :D
Спасибо!
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Post by HannaPonomarenko » December 11th, 2020, 2:42 am

victorseremet wrote:
December 11th, 2020, 2:13 am

Hi Mark,
Thank you for your corrections.
I deleted the redundant phrases. Also, I re-recorded and replaced the wrong stressed words.

https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/detstvo_02_tolstoy_128kb.mp3
The new duration is: 5:36

Thank you,
Victor
Thank you)

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Post by chulsky » December 12th, 2020, 1:58 pm

Sec.2 PL OK :thumbs:
Perfect, Victor, thank you for your efforts!
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Post by victorseremet » December 12th, 2020, 11:06 pm

chulsky wrote:
December 12th, 2020, 1:58 pm
Sec.2 PL OK :thumbs:
Perfect, Victor, thank you for your efforts!
Thank you, Mark!

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Post by victorseremet » December 20th, 2020, 2:22 pm

Hello Mark,

Here is Chapter 3 for PL.
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/detstvo_03_tolstoy_128kb.mp3
Duration: 9:54
Any constuctive criticism is welcome.

Thank you
Victor

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Post by HannaPonomarenko » December 20th, 2020, 4:36 pm

victorseremet wrote:
December 20th, 2020, 2:22 pm
Hello Mark,

Here is Chapter 3 for PL.
https://librivox.org/uploads/maryannspiegel/detstvo_03_tolstoy_128kb.mp3
Duration: 9:54
Any constuctive criticism is welcome.

Thank you
Victor
Hello, Victor!
Thank you)

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