COMPLETE[FICTION]Self-Control: A Novel by Brunton - thw

Post by **ToddHW** » November 22nd, 2020, 5:37 am

Thank you. You should have access to the MW now.

Todd

loupo · Post by **loupo** » November 22nd, 2020, 10:07 am

Hi there,

Could I claim section 28?

Cheers
Lou

Post by **ToddHW** » November 22nd, 2020, 11:44 am

Thank you.

Todd

MaryinArkansas · Post by **MaryinArkansas** » November 23rd, 2020, 10:50 am

PL Notes for Section 1 Just a few glitches.

14:46 Let them prosecute Should be: Let them persecute
15:15: Far from the senses Should be: Far from the scenes
18:51: Hargrave charmed her Should be: Hargrave charmed with her
21:37 While her lonely path Should be: While their lonely path
21:50 Took up his face Should be: Looked up his face
22:07: Do not sport me Should be: Do not sport with me
25:044 Drew near Should be: He drew near

Post by **ToddHW** » November 23rd, 2020, 1:30 pm

Thank you.

Todd

MaryinArkansas · Post by **MaryinArkansas** » November 24th, 2020, 11:11 am

PL Notes for Section 2 (Chapter 2)

At 2:30: And when summoned to supper. There’s a glitch in the word “supper” that makes the word pretty much disappear

At 9:14: Regarded to feminine decorum should be Regard to feminine decorum

At 16:24: At least with tardiness should be at last with tardiness

At 17:44: The real suffering…phrase is repeated at 17:46

Post by **ToddHW** » November 24th, 2020, 11:58 am

Thank you.

Todd

loupo · Post by **loupo** » November 26th, 2020, 3:57 pm

Happy Thanksgiving from the UK

Okay, Chapter 28 uploaded. It’s 41 mins 48 secs.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/selfcontrol_28_brunton_128kb.mp3

Lou

Post by **ToddHW** » November 26th, 2020, 8:02 pm

Thank you.

Todd

loupo · Post by **loupo** » November 27th, 2020, 4:33 am

Howdy,

I am waiting on any revisions for chapter 28 but could I claim chapter 29 too please.

Lou

Post by **ToddHW** » November 27th, 2020, 5:40 am

Thank you.

Todd

MaryinArkansas · Post by **MaryinArkansas** » November 28th, 2020, 10:55 am

PL Notes Section 6, Chapter VI. At 5:05 "her advertant" should be "her inadvertant" At 8:24 after "playing on the flute" this was left out: "the violin requiring more patience than he had to bestow"

Post by **ToddHW** » November 28th, 2020, 11:32 am

Thank you.

Todd

MaryinArkansas · Post by **MaryinArkansas** » November 30th, 2020, 9:33 am

PL Notes for Section 19, Chapter XIX: At 22:31 "Even after" should be "Even before"

Post by **ToddHW** » November 30th, 2020, 10:19 am

Thank you.

Todd