[Complete] The Old Tobacco Shop by William Bowen - lt

[RitaBoutros]

Oh, so sorry I made so much work for you!

Here's Chapter 16 Corrected:
https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/oldtobaccoshop_16_bowen_128kb.mp3
Duration: 33:41:72

Best wishes,
Lori

Sec 16 is PL OK

[njgorgen]

Here is chap 22 - 15m47s Nancy
Fun book to record!

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/oldtobaccoshop_22_bowen_128k.mp3

[RitaBoutros]

Nancy, section 14 is PL OK Thank you

[Lynnet]

Here is chap 22 - 15m47s Nancy
Fun book to record!

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/oldtobaccoshop_22_bowen_128k.mp3

Thank you

[RitaBoutros]

Here is chap 15 - 17m34s Nancy

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/oldtobaccoshop_15_bowen_128k.mp3

Sec 15 is PL OK

[RitaBoutros]

Here is chap 22 - 15m47s Nancy
Fun book to record!

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/oldtobaccoshop_22_bowen_128k.mp3

Sec 22 is PL OK Nice work!

[Lynnet]

We have an orphan

[TeeDaniels]

Hello, I would like to claim the orphan chapter 21 if it is still available.

-Tee

[Lynnet]

Hello, I would like to claim the orphan chapter 21 if it is still available.

-Tee

Thank you for claiming. Please be sure to read the first post and ask if you have questions.

[TeeDaniels]

Hello, I would like to claim the orphan chapter 21 if it is still available.

-Tee

Thank you for claiming. Please be sure to read the first post and ask if you have questions.

Hello. I have uploaded and welcome your feedback.


https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/oldtobaccoshop_23_bowen_128kb.mp3

Thank you.

-Tee

[Lynnet]

Hello, I would like to claim the orphan chapter 21 if it is still available.

-Tee

Thank you for claiming. Please be sure to read the first post and ask if you have questions.

Hello. I have uploaded and welcome your feedback.


https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/oldtobaccoshop_23_bowen_128kb.mp3

Thank you.

-Tee

Thank you. Rita will be along soon to proof listen.

How long is the file in mm:ss please? We need to know for validation purposes.
Also, please be careful to use the correct section number (this isn't always the same as chapter number... look at the far left column in the Magic Window.) Your section was _21_. By uploading it as _23_ you actually over-wrote the existing section 23. Not to worry... I have fixed it and retrieved Alix's _23_. But if you have edits, please re-upload as section 21

[RitaBoutros]

I will await Tee's corrected file name.

[Lynnet]

I will await Tee's corrected file name.

I corrected it so everything should be fine.

[RitaBoutros]

Hello, I would like to claim the orphan chapter 21 if it is still available.

-Tee

Thank you for claiming. Please be sure to read the first post and ask if you have questions.

Hello. I have uploaded and welcome your feedback.


https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/oldtobaccoshop_23_bowen_128kb.mp3

Thank you.

-Tee

Nice pacing and articulation in your recording. We do have a few notes on this chapter:

At the start, please reduce the silence to within .5 to 1.0 second.

At :21 "twenty one" is repeated
4:53 repeat of phrase: "Why don't you look at the..."
5:45 "merciful feathers" should be "merciful fathers"
6:00 audible loud intake of breath
8:02 "as in usual such places" should be "as usual in such places"
8:31 "this doesn't look much like a ..." should be "this don't look much like a..." [I know the grammar is incorrect but that's how he talks]

At the end, please reduce the silence to only 5 seconds - you have about 8

If you need assistance with editing, please let me know. Replacing or adding words is a "cut and paste" procedure in which you can highlight the second, open a new window (Ctl + N) to record the new words, copy them (Ctl + C), close the window without saving, return to the original window and use Ctl + V to paste them into your original recording.

[TeeDaniels]

Thank you for claiming. Please be sure to read the first post and ask if you have questions.

Hello. I have uploaded and welcome your feedback.


https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/oldtobaccoshop_23_bowen_128kb.mp3

Thank you.

-Tee

Nice pacing and articulation in your recording. We do have a few notes on this chapter:

At the start, please reduce the silence to within .5 to 1.0 second.

At :21 "twenty one" is repeated
4:53 repeat of phrase: "Why don't you look at the..."
5:45 "merciful feathers" should be "merciful fathers"
6:00 audible loud intake of breath
8:02 "as in usual such places" should be "as usual in such places"
8:31 "this doesn't look much like a ..." should be "this don't look much like a..." [I know the grammar is incorrect but that's how he talks]

At the end, please reduce the silence to only 5 seconds - you have about 8

If you need assistance with editing, please let me know. Replacing or adding words is a "cut and paste" procedure in which you can highlight the second, open a new window (Ctl + N) to record the new words, copy them (Ctl + C), close the window without saving, return to the original window and use Ctl + V to paste them into your original recording.

Oh my, cringe moment.
I am so glad there was no permanent damage. Thank you for your kindness and help with cleaning the mess I made.

I appreciate your kind feedback. I will address those issues and advise when uploaded, with the correct filename this time.

Happy Thanksgiving.

-Tee