[group] The White Czar: A Story of a Polar Bear - philc

[philchenevert]

Section 6: https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_06_hawkes_128kb.mp3

First submission, feedback gratefully received!

Thank you. Ignatius, the LibriPenguin of Happiness will put this into the Magic Window for proof listening.

[OneForTheBooks]

Here is a link to Section 4. It is 27m 18.06s long.

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_04_hawkes_128kb.mp3

[philchenevert]

Here is a link to Section 4. It is 27m 18.06s long.

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_04_hawkes_128kb.mp3

Thank yo u !!!

[ConanTheReader]

Section 5 complete and ready for check. Cool story.

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_05_hawkes_128kb.mp3 ....10m37s

[philchenevert]

Section 5 complete and ready for check. Cool story.

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_05_hawkes_128kb.mp3 ....10m37s

Right! Thanks

[RSlabaugh]

Section 6: https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_06_hawkes_128kb.mp3

First submission, feedback gratefully received!

Good job on your first submission! I do have a few notes for corrections to be made.

*Beginning silence should be a little longer so that the first words don't get chopped off by any player. Most people have it somewhere between .5 - 1 second. (Just not over 1 sec)
~9:03 stumble followed by correction "The young woman shrieked"
~9:43 repeat: "The great silence"
*End silence is around 2.8 seconds and should be ~5 sec.
*Volume is in range, but just barely (currently at 86.1 dB). It wouldn't hurt to amplify about 3 dB.

Again, I think it's sounding pretty good overall!

Thanks,

[RSlabaugh]

Here is a link to Section 4. It is 27m 18.06s long.

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_04_hawkes_128kb.mp3

Section 4 PL notes:
~1:30-33 longish pause
~3:25-29 longish pause
*Missed 'end of section... ' disclaimer

Quite the story, isn't it?!

Thanks,

[RSlabaugh]

Section 5 complete and ready for check. Cool story.

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_05_hawkes_128kb.mp3 ....10m37s

(PL note)
Everything sounds great, but that bitrate pulled another prank on you! Hopefully this time it'll let you fix it first try!

Thanks for another enjoyable listen!

[ConanTheReader]

Section 5 complete and ready for check. Cool story.

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_05_hawkes_128kb.mp3 ....10m37s

(PL note)
Everything sounds great, but that bitrate pulled another prank on you! Hopefully this time it'll let you fix it first try!

Thanks for another enjoyable listen!

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_05_hawkes_128kb.mp3

[RSlabaugh]

Section 5 complete and ready for check. Cool story.

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_05_hawkes_128kb.mp3 ....10m37s

(PL note)
Everything sounds great, but that bitrate pulled another prank on you! Hopefully this time it'll let you fix it first try!

Thanks for another enjoyable listen!

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_05_hawkes_128kb.mp3

You got it! PL OK

[ConanTheReader]

(PL note)
Everything sounds great, but that bitrate pulled another prank on you! Hopefully this time it'll let you fix it first try!

Thanks for another enjoyable listen!

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_05_hawkes_128kb.mp3

You got it! PL OK

yesssssssssss thank yahhhhh

[ConanTheReader]

hi phil.
may i please claim section 8?
peace
chris

[philchenevert]

hi phil.
may i please claim section 8?
peace
chris

Sure. Section 8 is all yours/

[Omarius]

Section 6: https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_06_hawkes_128kb.mp3

First submission, feedback gratefully received!

Good job on your first submission! I do have a few notes for corrections to be made.

*Beginning silence should be a little longer so that the first words don't get chopped off by any player. Most people have it somewhere between .5 - 1 second. (Just not over 1 sec)
~9:03 stumble followed by correction "The young woman shrieked"
~9:43 repeat: "The great silence"
*End silence is around 2.8 seconds and should be ~5 sec.
*Volume is in range, but just barely (currently at 86.1 dB). It wouldn't hurt to amplify about 3 dB.

Again, I think it's sounding pretty good overall!

Thanks,

Thanks for the great feedback. Can't believe I missed editing out the stumble!

Have made the corrections and boosted the volume a little, it's now at 88.4 dB

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_06_hawkes_128kb.mp3

[RSlabaugh]

Thanks for the great feedback. Can't believe I missed editing out the stumble!

Have made the corrections and boosted the volume a little, it's now at 88.4 dB

https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_06_hawkes_128kb.mp3

Spot PL OK

Congratulations on your first PL OK LibriVox contribution!!

Take care,