Thank you. Ignatius, the LibriPenguin of Happiness will put this into the Magic Window for proof listening.Omarius wrote: ↑November 6th, 2020, 4:22 pm Section 6: https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_06_hawkes_128kb.mp3
First submission, feedback gratefully received!
[group] The White Czar: A Story of a Polar Bear - philc
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Here is a link to Section 4. It is 27m 18.06s long.
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_04_hawkes_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_04_hawkes_128kb.mp3
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Thank yo u !!!OneForTheBooks wrote: ↑November 8th, 2020, 10:33 am Here is a link to Section 4. It is 27m 18.06s long.
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_04_hawkes_128kb.mp3
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Section 5 complete and ready for check. Cool story.
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_05_hawkes_128kb.mp3 ....10m37s
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_05_hawkes_128kb.mp3 ....10m37s
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Right! ThanksConanTheReader wrote: ↑November 8th, 2020, 9:48 pm Section 5 complete and ready for check. Cool story.
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_05_hawkes_128kb.mp3 ....10m37s
Good job on your first submission! I do have a few notes for corrections to be made.Omarius wrote: ↑November 6th, 2020, 4:22 pm Section 6: https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_06_hawkes_128kb.mp3
First submission, feedback gratefully received!
*Beginning silence should be a little longer so that the first words don't get chopped off by any player. Most people have it somewhere between .5 - 1 second. (Just not over 1 sec)
~9:03 stumble followed by correction "The young woman shrieked"
~9:43 repeat: "The great silence"
*End silence is around 2.8 seconds and should be ~5 sec.
*Volume is in range, but just barely (currently at 86.1 dB). It wouldn't hurt to amplify about 3 dB.
Again, I think it's sounding pretty good overall!
Thanks,
~Rosebud
Section 4 PL notes:OneForTheBooks wrote: ↑November 8th, 2020, 10:33 am Here is a link to Section 4. It is 27m 18.06s long.
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_04_hawkes_128kb.mp3
~1:30-33 longish pause
~3:25-29 longish pause
*Missed 'end of section... ' disclaimer
Quite the story, isn't it?!
Thanks,
~Rosebud
(PL note)ConanTheReader wrote: ↑November 8th, 2020, 9:48 pm Section 5 complete and ready for check. Cool story.
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_05_hawkes_128kb.mp3 ....10m37s
Everything sounds great, but that bitrate pulled another prank on you! Hopefully this time it'll let you fix it first try!
Thanks for another enjoyable listen!
~Rosebud
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https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_05_hawkes_128kb.mp3RSlabaugh wrote: ↑November 9th, 2020, 9:56 am(PL note)ConanTheReader wrote: ↑November 8th, 2020, 9:48 pm Section 5 complete and ready for check. Cool story.
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_05_hawkes_128kb.mp3 ....10m37s
Everything sounds great, but that bitrate pulled another prank on you! Hopefully this time it'll let you fix it first try!
Thanks for another enjoyable listen!
Peace
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You got it! PL OKConanTheReader wrote: ↑November 9th, 2020, 6:39 pmhttps://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_05_hawkes_128kb.mp3RSlabaugh wrote: ↑November 9th, 2020, 9:56 am(PL note)ConanTheReader wrote: ↑November 8th, 2020, 9:48 pm Section 5 complete and ready for check. Cool story.
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_05_hawkes_128kb.mp3 ....10m37s
Everything sounds great, but that bitrate pulled another prank on you! Hopefully this time it'll let you fix it first try!
Thanks for another enjoyable listen!
~Rosebud
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yesssssssssss thank yahhhhhRSlabaugh wrote: ↑November 10th, 2020, 11:08 amYou got it! PL OKConanTheReader wrote: ↑November 9th, 2020, 6:39 pmhttps://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_05_hawkes_128kb.mp3
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hi phil.
may i please claim section 8?
peace
chris
may i please claim section 8?
peace
chris
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Sure. Section 8 is all yours/ConanTheReader wrote: ↑November 10th, 2020, 11:53 am hi phil.
may i please claim section 8?
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Thanks for the great feedback. Can't believe I missed editing out the stumble!RSlabaugh wrote: ↑November 9th, 2020, 9:43 amGood job on your first submission! I do have a few notes for corrections to be made.Omarius wrote: ↑November 6th, 2020, 4:22 pm Section 6: https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_06_hawkes_128kb.mp3
First submission, feedback gratefully received!
*Beginning silence should be a little longer so that the first words don't get chopped off by any player. Most people have it somewhere between .5 - 1 second. (Just not over 1 sec)
~9:03 stumble followed by correction "The young woman shrieked"
~9:43 repeat: "The great silence"
*End silence is around 2.8 seconds and should be ~5 sec.
*Volume is in range, but just barely (currently at 86.1 dB). It wouldn't hurt to amplify about 3 dB.
Again, I think it's sounding pretty good overall!
Thanks,
Have made the corrections and boosted the volume a little, it's now at 88.4 dB
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_06_hawkes_128kb.mp3
Spot PL OKOmarius wrote: ↑November 10th, 2020, 3:07 pm
Thanks for the great feedback. Can't believe I missed editing out the stumble!
Have made the corrections and boosted the volume a little, it's now at 88.4 dB
https://librivox.org/uploads/philchenevert/whiteczar_06_hawkes_128kb.mp3
Congratulations on your first PL OK LibriVox contribution!!
Take care,
~Rosebud