Great job with Peg, love the Irish accent! Just a few notes.jennlea wrote: ↑September 25th, 2020, 7:14 am Here is Act 1 for Peg. She had quite a few lines wow! I had fun attempting an Irish accent for the first time and was constantly amused at myself while editing
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/pegomyheart_peg_1_128kb.mp3
(8:10) In the line, "My father mightn't like me to stay here, now that my uncle's dead " missed the second half of the line, bold part
(25:25) The line is "Yes. And he's got none" you read "Yes. And he's not gone."
(25:50) "And that's what the Irish are doing all over the world. They're driven from their own country. They're made wanders on the face of the earth and nothin' they ever earn'll make up to them for the separation from their homes and from their loved ones." missed the second half of the line, bold part
One other note. Can you record some laughter? You can just add it to the end of the recording. There are a few spots where Peg is supposed to be laughing and it would sound better with laughter than just a stage direction.
Overall, great job! I love how you are developing her character. Looking forward to hearing the other two acts!
