COMPLETE [poetry] Silhouettes by Arthur Symons -ck

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Kathimariewalsheck
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Post by Kathimariewalsheck »

Hi Carolin,
I read/recorded and uploaded 4 of the 7 poems. Neighborhood getting too noisy to do more. (I can hear it through the windows and the walls. :lol:
They all passed the check software.

Kathi

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/silhouettes_16_symons_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/silhouettes_32_symons_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/silhouettes_33_symons_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/silhouettes_48_symons_128kb.mp3
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39 PL OK
~ Shriya
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40 PL OK
~ Shriya
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41 PL OK
~ Shriya
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Carolin wrote: October 25th, 2020, 6:06 am Thank you Shriya!
spatel2 wrote: October 24th, 2020, 11:16 am Section 19 -

The text reads:
We smoke, to fancy that we dream,
And drink, a moment's joy to prove,
And fain would love, and only seem
To love because we cannot love.
You forgot to add the "to love." Please tell me if you want to mark it PL OK, I'm marking it See PL Notes for now.
This id say has to be fixed. The line doesnt make sense otherwise :) thank you for noting it :)
Hi Shriya & Carolin,

Thank you Shriya for your proof listening. However in the case of Section 19, I respectfully must disagree with your findings. The section sounds perfect to me.

No words missing and no mistakes.

Please forgive me if I request a second opinion.

~~~~
Thanks,
Bruce.
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63 PL OK
~ Shriya
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Hi Shriya & Carolin,

Thank you Shriya for your proof listening. However in the case of Section 19, I respectfully must disagree with your findings. The section sounds perfect to me.

No words missing and no mistakes.

Please forgive me if I request a second opinion.

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Thanks,
Bruce.
Ok, but I want to see what Carolin thinks first, since she is the BC....thanks for letting me know!
~ Shriya
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64 PL OK - again, wonderful French!!
~ Shriya
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Thanks again, Shriya!

I'll claim section 0 too. Looks like that'll finish up the book!
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Hi Carolin -

Here are sections 68-71 -

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/silhouettes_68_symons_128kb.mp3
Track length: 0:42

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/silhouettes_69_symons_128kb.mp3
Track length: 0:48

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/silhouettes_70_symons_128kb.mp3
Track length: 0:43

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/silhouettes_71_symons_128kb.mp3
Track length: 0:37

There's an error in section 71. The line reads, "Was still at mom a hope,". It should read, "Was still at morn a hope,". I'll report that to PG.
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Hi, here is my first section, ready for PL

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/silhouettes_52_symons_128kb.mp3 01:44

thanks
Ellies.
Carolin, I am more than happy to record the preface also
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Thank you all! Excuses for my late replies, we have a baby with chicken pox :roll:
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Kathimariewalsheck wrote: October 25th, 2020, 9:31 am Hi Carolin,
I read/recorded and uploaded 4 of the 7 poems. Neighborhood getting too noisy to do more. (I can hear it through the windows and the walls. :lol:
They all passed the check software.

Kathi

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/silhouettes_16_symons_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/silhouettes_32_symons_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/silhouettes_33_symons_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/silhouettes_48_symons_128kb.mp3
Thank you kathi! How long are the recordings (mm.ss)? Please remember to always post the duration of a recording when you post a link so that i can update the magic window :) thank you!
Carolin
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