COMPLETE [Fortnightly Poetry] The Rain by Madison Cawein - dl

Post by **aradlaw** » September 29th, 2020, 8:42 am

Thank you Bruce.

silverquill · Post by **silverquill** » September 30th, 2020, 8:45 am

More rain ....

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rain_cawein_lcw_128kb.mp3 2:11

Post by **aradlaw** » September 30th, 2020, 9:23 am

Thank you Larry.

Post by **aradlaw** » September 30th, 2020, 1:17 pm

Here is my reading, could someone please listen?
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rain_cawein_dl_128kb.mp3
2:32

Algy Pug · Post by **Algy Pug** » October 1st, 2020, 4:43 pm

aradlaw wrote: ↑September 30th, 2020, 1:17 pm Here is my reading, could someone please listen?
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rain_cawein_dl_128kb.mp3
2:32

Hi David

PL notes

0:12
Line missing
Where the redolent woodland was warm,

0:58
Thunder in background?

0:18 to 1:23
Whistling sound in background - the wind?

1:59
Of honey unfilched of a bee
I heard
Of honey unflinched of a bee

Cheers

Algy Pug · Post by **Algy Pug** » October 1st, 2020, 5:41 pm

Here is my reading:

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rain_cawein_alp_128kb.mp3
2:27

Cheers

eduardol · Post by **eduardol** » October 2nd, 2020, 3:15 pm

Hello, here's my take on the poem.

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rain_cawein_el_128kb.mp3
2:18

Post by **aradlaw** » October 2nd, 2020, 5:32 pm

Thank you Algy and Edwardo.

Thanks for the PL Algy, I will get to the edits soon.

Post by **aradlaw** » October 3rd, 2020, 12:33 pm

Edits complete with the same time of 2:32
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rain_cawein_dl_128kb.mp3

Algy Pug · Post by **Algy Pug** » October 3rd, 2020, 3:26 pm

aradlaw wrote: ↑October 3rd, 2020, 12:33 pm Edits complete with the same time of 2:32
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rain_cawein_dl_128kb.mp3

Hi David

Just one tiny error:

2:00
Of honey unfilched of a bee,
I heard
Of honey unfilched by a bee,

Cheers

Frank249942 · Post by **Frank249942** » October 5th, 2020, 6:29 am

The Rain coming in at 2:31.5sec
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rain_caewin_flt_128kb.mp3

Post by **aradlaw** » October 5th, 2020, 7:12 am

Thank you Frank.

Post by **aradlaw** » October 5th, 2020, 7:19 am

Algy Pug wrote: ↑October 3rd, 2020, 3:26 pm Hi David

Just one tiny error:

Cheers

Last tiny correction (I Hope)

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rain_cawein_dl_128kb.mp3
2:32

Algy Pug · Post by **Algy Pug** » October 5th, 2020, 7:40 am

aradlaw wrote: ↑October 5th, 2020, 7:19 am
Last tiny correction (I Hope)

https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/rain_cawein_dl_128kb.mp3
2:32

Thanks David

Reading is now PL OK.

Cheers

Post by **aradlaw** » October 5th, 2020, 1:35 pm

Thank you for your patience Algy.