Thank you, Aïda!AidaAida wrote: ↑September 15th, 2020, 5:38 pm
Chapter (01) is ready for spot PL : https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_01_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3
Length : 03:46
Thanks
Aïda
Michael
SaraHale wrote: ↑September 13th, 2020, 6:27 am Hey, Issamel!
Welcome to LibriVox. I'd like to tell you that you've done an AWESOME job recording this long section.
Before I go on with my PL Notes, I would like you to know that you are free to ignore what you like. You aren't on any obligation to correct all of them. I just like to write what I noticed in the recording.
PL Notes:
PDF Page 133
@2:20 - فان الغدر you said العذر (which means excuse).
PDF Page 134
@3:00 - حتى حملتَهُ
I don't know how to explain it, so here's how I pronounce it.
https://voca.ro/1lsAzx9IFSEt
@3:15 - في التغييب عن موقع الامر
you said من موقع الامور
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@6:40 - نعم قد بلغنى
you missed قد
@6:50 - والتضييع للامانات
you said امانه
@7:27 - ان يُسر
you said يستر
@7:37 - القى عن نفسك وزره
you said نفسه
@7:59 - ما يحملني على
you said يجعلنى
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@10:38 - من العفو عن اهل
you said على اهل
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@12:58 - فا ما
I know it's unclearو but I believe it is فاما من من دونه
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@14:59 - اصبحت لُعلمي ببراءَتي
you missed لُعلمي
@15:10 - وظهوراً
you said طهوراً
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@19:29 - لك هذا المثل ايها الملك
you said المثال
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@20:47 - وهل ويلك
you said وهل رأيت
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@23:22 - ذلك ولا يعرفهُ
you missed لا
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@25:30 - ولا تأخذك فيهِ
you said تأخذه
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@28:46 - فانك ممن لا
you said فانت
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@30:55 - فجهر النمر
you said فهجر النمر
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@33:02 - لم يُعلَم له جرم
you said يَعلَم
Again, feel free to correct what you would like. And I hope you will try recording another section. Talk to you soon!!
Thank you, Issam!issamel wrote: ↑September 20th, 2020, 4:05 pm
Thank you once again, I did them all so I think it is ready for spot PL
Section 10 : https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_10_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3
time 33:44
Hi Aida,AidaAida wrote: ↑September 15th, 2020, 5:38 pmChapter (01) is ready for spot PL : https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_01_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3
Hi Michael,Kazbek wrote: ↑September 23rd, 2020, 8:05 pmHi Aida,AidaAida wrote: ↑September 15th, 2020, 5:38 pmChapter (01) is ready for spot PL : https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_01_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3
I did spot PL for section 1, and I wanted to check with you about the PL note above. I'm not sure what was in the original recording. I'm hearing alhamdu lillaha, and it looks like Sara was suggesting lillahi instead (although she didn't pronounce the final vowel in her sample). Did you decide to leave your version, or did I misunderstand the PL note?
Michael
Thanks, Aida! PL OK!AidaAida wrote: ↑September 24th, 2020, 8:02 am Hi Michael,
"Lillahi" is the correct one. I recorded it again : https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_01_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3
Thanks,
Aïda
Thanks for undertaking all those corrections! I wanted to check with you about two of them. As before, you're welcome to leave them as is, and doubly so because Arabic isn't my native language.issamel wrote: ↑September 20th, 2020, 4:05 pm Thank you once again, I did them all so I think it is ready for spot PL
Section 10 : https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_10_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3
time 33:44
Not at all, you are right about hamaltah, I had it that way, but I changed it as I was told toKazbek wrote: ↑September 24th, 2020, 8:28 pm
Thanks for undertaking all those corrections! I wanted to check with you about two of them. As before, you're welcome to leave them as is, and doubly so because Arabic isn't my native language.
PDF Page 134 @3:00 حتى حملتَهُ
I hear "hamaltuh", and this is also how Sara said it... but doesn't it mean "I brought" instead of "you brought" (hamaltah)? (and, yes, I do realize that I'm up against two native speakers )
PDF Page 136 @7:30 ان يُسر
I hear "yusra" instead of "yusarr".
Michael
Thanks, Issam! The corrections are PL OK, but I noticed that the recording grew by 4 seconds since the last version. I took a closer look, and I think you forgot to delete one of the corrections from the end of the recording. While we're deleting stuff, could you also shorten the silence at the start? It should be no more than 1 second.issamel wrote: ↑September 25th, 2020, 4:04 am Not at all, you are right about hamaltah, I had it that way, but I changed it as I was told to
I changed both,
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_10_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3
33:48
Sorry about that, I think I know what Ctrl+Z does nowKazbek wrote: ↑September 25th, 2020, 6:35 am
Thanks, Issam! The corrections are PL OK, but I noticed that the recording grew by 4 seconds since the last version. I took a closer look, and I think you forgot to delete one of the corrections from the end of the recording. While we're deleting stuff, could you also shorten the silence at the start? It should be no more than 1 second.
Michael
Thank you, PL OK! Congratulations on completing your first LibriVox contribution in Arabic (not an easy one)!
Hi Thalzuhd,