COMPLETE A Day's Journey by Netta Syrett - rap

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neecheelok70
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You are welcome. Jim :)
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RitaBoutros wrote: September 16th, 2020, 5:11 am
ProfoundMenace wrote: September 14th, 2020, 8:03 pm Here is Chapter 1 (8:55)

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/daysjourney_01_syrett_128kb.mp3
PL Notes:

Everything sounds fine and all corrections made. We still don't have 5 seconds of silence at the end however. Can you add this?
Here is Chapter 1 with the final 5 seconds of silence

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/daysjourney_01_syrett_128kb.mp3 (9:00)
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RitaBoutros wrote: September 16th, 2020, 6:00 am
ProfoundMenace wrote: September 13th, 2020, 5:32 pm Here is Chapter 2. Please let me know if there is anything I can improve. I will have the edits of Chapter 1 by tomorrow :D

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/daysjourney_02_syrett_128kb.mp3
PL notes for section 2:

3:08 in a gown that could be
4:18 "for the last year and a half" should be "last year or two"
8:22 "last year" should be "that year"
13:04 "she always speaks" should be "he always speaks"
13:35 "you'd like to come to my room" should be "you'd like to come to your room"

There should be a full 5 seconds of silence at the end
Here is Chapter 2 with edits

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/daysjourney_02_syrett_128kb.mp3 (15:21)
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PL notes for chapters 1 and 2:

Thank you for the corrections - they sound great!

I do need to let you know, however, that section 1 now has 6 seconds of silence at the end, and section 2 has only 4.

I don't mean to be a stickler about this, but these really should be corrected so that when the book is catalogued, there is a consistent amount of space between each chapter. Can you take care of this?
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I think we can manage with that. Your pick. I don't want you to think that submitting a recording is too dificalt and give up. Silences would be fine.
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See below. Sorry.
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Thanks, Jim. But please post their durations.
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The times are there now. Jim
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neecheelok70 wrote: September 17th, 2020, 8:46 am Here is Section 7.

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/daysjourney_07_syrett_128kb.mp3

13:33

Jim :)
Sec 7 sounds fine but we have a note at 10:53:
"and for which she not unnaturally" please delete "for"
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I hope I won't end up holding things up. But I can't fix my mistakes until next weekend because I am out of town. Jim
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Thank you! :D
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Huge thanks.
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