adr6090 wrote: ↑June 16th, 2020, 7:31 pm
section 14 edits
*0.30 add 1.00 to beginning silence
*4:22 text shows meditating, I hear mediating. Please record text word & delete mediating
*5:18 duplicate beginning with Rodomonte & ends with "asked". Please delete the duplicate
*6:44 text shows "which flowed", I hear "which followed". Please record text word and delete which followed.
*7:01 text shows "thereupon sallied" , I hear "thereupon sailed out". Please record as text shows and delete thereupon sailed out.
*8:46 text shows he growled "between his teeth", I hear he growled "beneath his teeth." Please record as text shows and delete "he growled beneath his teeth".
*12:00 text shows "was revived", I hear "was received". Please record as text shows and delete "was received"
*14:34 Line not in following "in marriage" before "the mounted rabican". Please record that line and insert it.
*17:14 "op" followed by opportunity. Please delete "op"
*18:56 text shows to "meet them" and not "to meet him". Please replace him with them.
*21:15 1/2 text shows "possessor", I hear "professor". Please replace professor with possessor.
*21:18 obvious inhale followed with a "clack sound", please delete those.
*22:04 I hear "and" hesitantly. It is not in the text, please delete it.
*22:39 the text shows "invoked", I hear evoked. Please record as the text shows and delete evoked.
24:22 there is a lengthy empty space here. Please cut 1:00 second out here.
The end is longer than the 5 seconds of silent space asked for, please cut 3 1/2 seconds off.
I did notice quite a few areas with what sounds like you inhaling before beginning the sentence. It is okay in this section though please do attempt to lessen these in your future recordings. Do you listen to and look at your recording before you post it? It is good to proof it in that fashion and it feels wonderful to know that you did that as your final step in the recording.
I did notice a number of areas that sound as if you are taking a breath before beginning on a new sentence. I will not ask you to re-rerecord them though try to pay attention to your recording after you have recorded the section.
I know that it may seem like many edits for you to repair. It will get to be less as you record more & you learn as you move along.