COMPLETE[ANIMALS]The Living Animals of the World, Volume 2: Birds, Reptiles and Amphibians, Fishes, Molluscs, etc. -Leni
Can I please claim Chapter 1? Thanks!
~ Shriya
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Thanks Tori for the revised file - much improved. There are still a couple of issues which I'm sure you can "dispatch" in no time:ToriBee wrote: ↑September 12th, 2020, 12:41 pm Part 49 take 2
https://librivox.org/uploads/leni/livinganimals2_49_various_128kb.mp3
Length 26:15
Happy to make any changes needed
Thanks!
:20 please add "part 6"
:24 delete the name of Reverend Wood for this section. His contribution was in an earlier part of the chapter. Keep only Kirby.
:28 there is a repeat of the section title
1:37 commonest should be "commonmost"
2:09 tuft should be "tufted"
6:33 brought to the Cormer should be "brought to Cromer"
18:00 through light should be "thorough light"
26:02 gentiles should be "gentles"
Add one second at the end (we're to have a full 5 seconds)
Edits made for part 49RitaBoutros wrote: ↑September 13th, 2020, 6:54 amThanks Tori for the revised file - much improved. There are still a couple of issues which I'm sure you can "dispatch" in no time:ToriBee wrote: ↑September 12th, 2020, 12:41 pm Part 49 take 2
https://librivox.org/uploads/leni/livinganimals2_49_various_128kb.mp3
Length 26:15
Happy to make any changes needed
Thanks!
:20 please add "part 6"
:24 delete the name of Reverend Wood for this section. His contribution was in an earlier part of the chapter. Keep only Kirby.
:28 there is a repeat of the section title
1:37 commonest should be "commonmost"
2:09 tuft should be "tufted"
6:33 brought to the Cormer should be "brought to Cromer"
18:00 through light should be "thorough light"
26:02 gentiles should be "gentles"
Add one second at the end (we're to have a full 5 seconds)
https://librivox.org/uploads/leni/livinganimals2_49_various_128kb.mp3
New length: 26:07
Thank you for your help!
"To teach if we are called upon, to be taught if we are fortunate."
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Tori, one more edit is needed at 6:25: The name of the place is Cromer, not Cormer
Hi! I don't have the time to read Chapter 1. Is this ok? Thanks for understanding!
~ Shriya
RitaBoutros wrote: ↑September 11th, 2020, 5:48 amdrempels wrote: ↑September 10th, 2020, 7:05 pmI moved "The Auk Tribe" from the body of the text to the chapter title. I think we're set, but let me know if not! New time 19:20.33.RitaBoutros wrote: ↑August 31st, 2020, 5:17 am
PL notes for sec 4:
:32 there is a repeat of chapter 4 etc
I took another look at the chapter heading and I see that "The Auk Tribe" is indeed part of the chapter heading, as a subheading. Therefore, it should definitely be included.
Everything else is fine.
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Thanks,
Cathy
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Sec 4 is PL OK
Thank you
Thank you