Corrections,benderca wrote: ↑May 5th, 2020, 3:27 pm Uncle Roger Chapter 12 is PL OK!
(I love your burst of laughter! Nice!)
Uncle Roger, Chapter 13:
0:16 It seems impossible he could walk so far. Instead of "far," you say "fast."
Uncle Roger, Chapter 14:
The last line of your recording should be: "She's got a head on her shoulders."
The Gutenberg text I used for the script had a typo in it, but I checked with the scanned book on archive, because that "of" didn't seem to make sense, and sure enough, it should be "on". Sorry about that. (I'll correct the script).
https://archive.org/details/storygirl00mont_1/page/148/mode/2up
Uncle Roger Chapter 15 and Chapter 16 are PL OK
(Your volume is a little high -- at 93.4 and 93.2 they fall out of the target range of 86-92 dB, but I can adjust them when I edit. If you use Checker 0.96 before you upload your files, you can adjust the volume yourself in the future). Great temper tantrum in Chapter 15 -- it's nice to see a different side of Uncle Roger. And great fit of laughter in Chapter 16! ).
Thanks, Adam!
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/storygirl_roger_13_128kb.mp3 0:36
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/storygirl_roger_14_128kb.mp3 0:53