COMPLETE[PLAY] Belinda: an April Folly, by A.A. Milne - thw
Wow! Seriously, Milne's mega-copious stage directions make it take MUCH longer than usual to splice the act together. Just two more pages, though. I'll have those finished soon, but I'm going to hold it overnight so I can come back with fresh ears tomorrow and listen to the whole track for any volume or pacing spots I may want to adjust before I upload it for you, Campbell.
By the way, Larry, amazing job with the stage directions.
By the way, Larry, amazing job with the stage directions.
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Sounds good, I'm excited!LCaulkins wrote: ↑August 16th, 2020, 4:06 pm Wow! Seriously, Milne's mega-copious stage directions make it take MUCH longer than usual to splice the act together. Just two more pages, though. I'll have those finished soon, but I'm going to hold it overnight so I can come back with fresh ears tomorrow and listen to the whole track for any volume or pacing spots I may want to adjust before I upload it for you, Campbell.
By the way, Larry, amazing job with the stage directions.
Campbell
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And doing this play followed Torchbearers where Larry did 4 hours of stage directions!! All these modern playwrights that think they have to tell actors how to act....LCaulkins wrote: ↑August 16th, 2020, 4:06 pm Wow! Seriously, Milne's mega-copious stage directions make it take MUCH longer than usual to splice the act together. Just two more pages, though. I'll have those finished soon, but I'm going to hold it overnight so I can come back with fresh ears tomorrow and listen to the whole track for any volume or pacing spots I may want to adjust before I upload it for you, Campbell.
By the way, Larry, amazing job with the stage directions.
Thanks, Todd
There it is, Campbell!
Everybody has done such a remarkable job. I think it's a fun play, and it's coming together fantastically.
We are missing one Devenish line, at 31:17. I've sent JohanSupertramp a message, and hopefully he'll see that soonish.
Everybody has done such a remarkable job. I think it's a fun play, and it's coming together fantastically.
We are missing one Devenish line, at 31:17. I've sent JohanSupertramp a message, and hopefully he'll see that soonish.
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Yay! So if I understand correctly, I can still PL this, knowing that we are missing a line. Correct?
Campbell
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Yep
And then we'll just spot check that one portion later.
And then we'll just spot check that one portion later.
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I have finished PLing Act 1! Everybody did such a wonderful job, very fun to listen to. And you definitely took a lot of work upon yourself in the editing. I was not expecting to hear every single stage direction, but props to you for putting in the extra work. I have a decent amount of notes, most of them optional. Most of them are volume notes. Be aware that I have mild sound sensitivity, so if you find a note that you don't agree with feel free to ignore.
One thing I noticed is the stage directions felt slightly quiet throughout. No need to change here (I've pointed out any lines I felt could use some fiddling with) but something maybe to think about for the next few acts.
3:12, 6:20-6:35, 15:35 - volume jump
18:45 - stage directions could be a bit louder
19:11-19:13 - these two lined (‘no’, ‘hurriedly’) could be a bit louder
Line beginning at 20:01 could be a bit quieter
21:48-22:01 could be a bit louder
25:49, 29:55 - stage directions could be louder
35:03 - ‘Mrs. Tremayne, I claim the right of age...’ sounds a bit loud to me
35:25 - ‘Mrs. Tremayne, I am a man of substantial position’ also sounds loud
38:33 - this line feels like a volume jump
39:40-39:46 - very mild, but this sounds a bit jumpy/staticky to me
40:02 - Baxter’s line sounds loud
42:07 - ‘how do you do?’ sounds a bit quiet
46:38 - I believe it should be ‘BELINDA, with that…’ (it currently is missing the Belinda). Not sure if this is my mistake in not catching it PLing, but there should be a stage direction that would be easy to copy from
Can't wait for more!
One thing I noticed is the stage directions felt slightly quiet throughout. No need to change here (I've pointed out any lines I felt could use some fiddling with) but something maybe to think about for the next few acts.
3:12, 6:20-6:35, 15:35 - volume jump
18:45 - stage directions could be a bit louder
19:11-19:13 - these two lined (‘no’, ‘hurriedly’) could be a bit louder
Line beginning at 20:01 could be a bit quieter
21:48-22:01 could be a bit louder
25:49, 29:55 - stage directions could be louder
35:03 - ‘Mrs. Tremayne, I claim the right of age...’ sounds a bit loud to me
35:25 - ‘Mrs. Tremayne, I am a man of substantial position’ also sounds loud
38:33 - this line feels like a volume jump
39:40-39:46 - very mild, but this sounds a bit jumpy/staticky to me
40:02 - Baxter’s line sounds loud
42:07 - ‘how do you do?’ sounds a bit quiet
46:38 - I believe it should be ‘BELINDA, with that…’ (it currently is missing the Belinda). Not sure if this is my mistake in not catching it PLing, but there should be a stage direction that would be easy to copy from
Can't wait for more!
Campbell
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Campbell, these are amazing notes! Thank you so much! Super appreciated.
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Hi Lynette,
I know you are recovering from Covid, but I wanted to let you know that due to health reasons I will not be able to continue PLing this project when you are able to resume. This is such a great play, and I know it will turn out wonderfully. Thanks for letting me listen!
I know you are recovering from Covid, but I wanted to let you know that due to health reasons I will not be able to continue PLing this project when you are able to resume. This is such a great play, and I know it will turn out wonderfully. Thanks for letting me listen!
Campbell
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Hi Campbell, thank you so much for the work you did on Act I. It hasn't been addressed by me yet, but I want you to know it is **greatly** appreciated and was exactly the kind of detailed attention I was hoping for. This play is next in line for attention when I finish my contribution for Wives & Daughters, and my editing will be much better because of your input.lymiewithpurpose wrote: ↑March 21st, 2021, 8:50 am Hi Lynette,
I know you are recovering from Covid, but I wanted to let you know that due to health reasons I will not be able to continue PLing this project when you are able to resume. This is such a great play, and I know it will turn out wonderfully. Thanks for letting me listen!
I hate that you're having to deal with health stuff. You are a bright spot in LibriVox, and I hope you have lots of good moments of peace and warmth.
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By the way, when you are working on this again, the filename for Act 1 should be changed to
"https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/belinda_1_milne_128kb.mp3" not
"https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/belinda_act1_milne_128kb.mp3" - just using the act number rather than saying "act" as well.
Other act filenames similar, of course.
Thanks, Todd
"https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/belinda_1_milne_128kb.mp3" not
"https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/belinda_act1_milne_128kb.mp3" - just using the act number rather than saying "act" as well.
Other act filenames similar, of course.
Thanks, Todd
will do
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OK, Todd This project now has my priority attention to finish up.
I've got the missing line, am procuring another DPL, and will finish re-editing act 1 tomorrow.
I've got the missing line, am procuring another DPL, and will finish re-editing act 1 tomorrow.
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Ciufi Galeazzi will be our new DPL
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