COMPLETE Library of the World's Best Literature, Ancient and Modern, volume 11-Leni
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Hello Shreyasethi,
Very nice job on Section 2! Two small notes: at 9:30 please omit the repetition of "I tried to draw them up" and at 12:03 please add "I can't tell" between "there" and "but."
Thanks,
Lora
Very nice job on Section 2! Two small notes: at 9:30 please omit the repetition of "I tried to draw them up" and at 12:03 please add "I can't tell" between "there" and "but."
Thanks,
Lora
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Hi Alan,
Section #35 is PL Okay.
Many thanks,
Lora
Section #35 is PL Okay.
Many thanks,
Lora
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Hi Siler (sweaver),
Chapter 39 is PL Okay. Good phrasing and expression; reading speed is okay--I wouldn't advise going any faster. Thanks for your contribution!
Lora
Chapter 39 is PL Okay. Good phrasing and expression; reading speed is okay--I wouldn't advise going any faster. Thanks for your contribution!
Lora
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Hi Dick,
Chapter 9 seemed to me to be a hard text to read--lots of long sentences--but you did really well. I only have two minor notes: at 23:21, please add "light" to "splendor of living light eternal" and at 24:20 please check--I think "tomb" should be "womb."
Thank you!
Lora
Chapter 9 seemed to me to be a hard text to read--lots of long sentences--but you did really well. I only have two minor notes: at 23:21, please add "light" to "splendor of living light eternal" and at 24:20 please check--I think "tomb" should be "womb."
Thank you!
Lora
Thanks again ...
Here it is with the corrections ...
https://librivox.org/uploads/leni/worldsbestliterature11_09_various_128kb.mp3
.... really appreciate this ...
Dick Bourgeois-Doyle
Here it is with the corrections ...
https://librivox.org/uploads/leni/worldsbestliterature11_09_various_128kb.mp3
.... really appreciate this ...
Dick Bourgeois-Doyle
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HI!!!!
Here is the updated Section 2 (31:26). Sorry for any inconvenience.
https://librivox.org/uploads/leni/worldsbestliterature11_02_various_128kb.mp3
Thanks
-SS
Here is the updated Section 2 (31:26). Sorry for any inconvenience.
https://librivox.org/uploads/leni/worldsbestliterature11_02_various_128kb.mp3
Thanks
-SS
Hi
Here is Section 16 bio Alphonse Daudet 26:38 in length
https://librivox.org/uploads/leni/worldsbestliterature11_16_various_128kb.mp3
Thanks again
Dick Bourgeois-Doyle
Here is Section 16 bio Alphonse Daudet 26:38 in length
https://librivox.org/uploads/leni/worldsbestliterature11_16_various_128kb.mp3
Thanks again
Dick Bourgeois-Doyle
Thanks much!DickBD wrote: ↑August 13th, 2020, 7:44 am Hi
Here is Section 16 bio Alphonse Daudet 26:38 in length
https://librivox.org/uploads/leni/worldsbestliterature11_16_various_128kb.mp3
Thanks again
Dick Bourgeois-Doyle
Leni
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Thanks to both SS and Dick--your corrections were perfect and those sections are PL Okay.
Lora
Lora
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Hello to Shreya,
You did a wonderful job with the poems/sea songs! Your tone and rhythm were great to listen to. Here are my notes--not too much, I hope:
8:18--omit repetition of "Why, you never will hear of me more."
8:30--please omit repetition of "there's a cherub"
8:34--omit repetition of "to keep watch"
9:29--the word "he" should be "has"
10:12--please add "Shall give" to the phrase "to call life's crew together"
Please add 4 more seconds of silence at the end of the recording.
Thank you!
Lora
You did a wonderful job with the poems/sea songs! Your tone and rhythm were great to listen to. Here are my notes--not too much, I hope:
8:18--omit repetition of "Why, you never will hear of me more."
8:30--please omit repetition of "there's a cherub"
8:34--omit repetition of "to keep watch"
9:29--the word "he" should be "has"
10:12--please add "Shall give" to the phrase "to call life's crew together"
Please add 4 more seconds of silence at the end of the recording.
Thank you!
Lora
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HELLO!!!!!
Here is the corrected section 37 (10:34)
https://librivox.org/uploads/leni/worldsbestliterature11_37_various_128kb.mp3
Thanks!!!!
-SS
Here is the corrected section 37 (10:34)
https://librivox.org/uploads/leni/worldsbestliterature11_37_various_128kb.mp3
Thanks!!!!
-SS