you are so right, when you did the first weeping, some tears were welling up in my eyes as well (I am over-sensitive to such emotions). An awesome job you did here in this final act.
I'm so glad you took this role, which was not an easy one. This will all sound so great once assembled.
If I may, I would suggest one correction though. I have the impression you misunderstood the last-but-one-scene, because you delivered your speech again very tearfully, which strikes me out of character for what is going on emotionally in Dan'l at this point.
In my opinion, Dan'l is VERY angry with Sir Jasper here, because he realizes that in fact HE, not Jasper, is really the father of Dorothy (and Jasper didn't tell him and he was the guy who ruined his life in the first place) and that Jasper is somehow the reason why Dorothy's mother died in sorrow. So instead of weeping, I think this speech from 12:32 till 12:52
(p. 148) "Stay ! come back" ... till "thy cursed life for hers", should be acted out with thundering rage, or barely suppressed anger
. After that, Dorothy pleads for Sir Jasper and calms Dan'l down again, so the final speech is in excellent character again.
Other than that, all perfect !
Thank you so much