COMPLETE: The Younger Sister by Catherine Anne Hubback -jo

ElizabethRayner · Post by **ElizabethRayner** » July 30th, 2020, 3:38 pm

knotyouraveragejo wrote: ↑July 30th, 2020, 12:13 pm Hi Elizabeth,

Keep numbering the filenames in numerical order based on the section numbers in the MW. When you get to Volume 2, at the beginning of your intros and outros, say Volume 2, chapter 1... ; volume 2 chapter 2...; etc. and similarly when you get to Volume 3, say Volume 3, Chapter 1..., Volume 3, Chapter 2..., etc.

If you wish, you can add "end of Volume 1" and "end of Volume 2" at the end of the appropriate chapters. That is up to you.

Thank you! I shall do that

Tortilla · Post by **Tortilla** » July 30th, 2020, 7:32 pm

More DPL Notes!

Chapter 3 is PL OK!

For Chapter 4 spot check:

22:04 - at the end of the newly inserted line, there a clicky noise that makes it feel edited in. Can you fix this?

Chapter 5:

0:59 - A bit of a clipping transition, can this be smoothed out?

20:58 - "I am sure most of my friends are *more* anxious to stay than go." ["more" was missing from reading.]

Chapter 6:

0:46 - "[...]curtains, and put *by* all the things in the best bed-room ["by" was missing from reading.]

9:17 - disruptive noise similar to a door closing, please edit out!

9:35 - another noise to edit out

Chapter 7:

1:06 - disruptive noise similar to a door closing, please edit out!

4:48 - pause needed between paragraphs

6:45 - Clicking noise between sentences

16:07 - "[...]who if he had *had* to work for his bread [second "had" was missing from reading.]

ElizabethRayner · Post by **ElizabethRayner** » July 30th, 2020, 7:44 pm

Tortilla wrote: ↑July 30th, 2020, 7:32 pm More DPL Notes!

Chapter 3 is PL OK!

For Chapter 4 spot check:

22:04 - at the end of the newly inserted line, there a clicky noise that makes it feel edited in. Can you fix this?
Chapter 5:

0:59 - A bit of a clipping transition, can this be smoothed out?

20:58 - "I am sure most of my friends are *more* anxious to stay than go." ["more" was missing from reading.]
Chapter 6:

0:46 - "[...]curtains, and put *by* all the things in the best bed-room ["by" was missing from reading.]

9:17 - disruptive noise similar to a door closing, please edit out!

9:35 - another noise to edit out
Chapter 7:

1:06 - disruptive noise similar to a door closing, please edit out!

4:48 - pause needed between paragraphs

6:45 - Clicking noise between sentences

16:07 - "[...]who if he had *had* to work for his bread [second "had" was missing from reading.]

Thank you very much! I shall get to fixing those things

ElizabethRayner · Post by **ElizabethRayner** » July 30th, 2020, 10:06 pm

I'm going through fixing the things right now, thank you for listening! The only thing is in chapter 7, at the sixteen minute mark my second 'had' is in there, it's just spoken quite quickly (gosh dang my Scottish accent!) - my microphone makes it horrendous to try and reinsert sections so I'm hoping it will be okay left as it is!
Also at 1:06 I have tried to quieten the noise of the door as much as possible (I must just live in a house of door slammers!)
Please let me know if this is okay by you, thanks again!

ElizabethRayner · Post by **ElizabethRayner** » July 31st, 2020, 11:21 am

Vol 1, ch 11: 25:50

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/youngersister_11_hubback_128kb.mp3

End of Volume 1, Hooray!

Tortilla · Post by **Tortilla** » July 31st, 2020, 7:34 pm

Hooray! Congrats on finishing Volume 1.

Everything up to Vol. 1, Ch. 7 is PL OK now.

Chapter 8:

0:23 - "[...]suppose some of you girls will be *for* going over" ["for" was missing from reading.]

15:55 - audible mouse click

16:05 - audible mouse click

16:39 - audible mouse click

25:12 - "[...] equal to imparting to her *companion* the deepest mysteries" ["companion" read as "comparison"]

ElizabethRayner · Post by **ElizabethRayner** » August 1st, 2020, 9:39 am

Vol 2, ch 1: 51:56

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/youngersister_12_hubback_128kb.mp3

Tortilla · Post by **Tortilla** » August 1st, 2020, 10:38 am

Hurray!

Chapter 9:

4:57 - distracting breathy click

11:12 - "'you shall not be obliged to make martyrs of *yourselves*,' said Miss Osborne" ["yourselves" read as "yourself"]

12:49 - distracting breathy click

SPOT PL for Chapter 8:

Where you replaced "comparison" with "companion" at ~25:12, please make sure you are cleaning up the background noise with your new edits.

ElizabethRayner · Post by **ElizabethRayner** » August 2nd, 2020, 3:23 pm

Tortilla wrote: ↑August 1st, 2020, 10:38 am Hurray!

Chapter 9:

4:57 - distracting breathy click

11:12 - "'you shall not be obliged to make martyrs of *yourselves*,' said Miss Osborne" ["yourselves" read as "yourself"]

12:49 - distracting breathy click
SPOT PL for Chapter 8:

Where you replaced "comparison" with "companion" at ~25:12, please make sure you are cleaning up the background noise with your new edits.

I shall get to fixing those, thank you! Sorry about the change of mic quality, for some odd reason it honestly sounds different everytime I try to record anything even with noise cleaning, but I have recorded that section again and have tried to make it as unobtrusive as possible, hopefully I'll learn more editing tricks as I get better!

Tortilla · Post by **Tortilla** » August 2nd, 2020, 5:36 pm

It's alright!

Vol. 1, Chapters 8, 9, and 10 are PL OK.

Tortilla · Post by **Tortilla** » August 2nd, 2020, 7:45 pm

Chapter 11:

5:36 - "hands of the servants and children, and tables unpolished and scratched," [awkward cut/transition after "children"]

7:17 - "From Wednesday to Saturday: there was I left" [where awkward transition at "Saturday: there and some microphone static over "Wednesday"]

8:18 - distracting breathy click

13:39 - "As soon as her attention was released Emma left the room," repeated twice

15:18 - noticeable hesitation

16:52 - distracting background noise

17:15 - "The Osbornes will *all* turn all your heads..." [reading missing "all"]

18:37 - distracting clicking noise

23:21 - distracting clicking noise

ElizabethRayner · Post by **ElizabethRayner** » August 2nd, 2020, 9:40 pm

Vol 2, ch 2: 37:29

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/youngersister_13_hubback_128kb.mp3

ElizabethRayner · Post by **ElizabethRayner** » August 6th, 2020, 10:15 am

I shall get to fixing those corrections, but here is Vol 2, ch 3 in the meantime: 31:20

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/youngersister_14_hubback_128kb.mp3

Tortilla · Post by **Tortilla** » August 8th, 2020, 5:32 pm

Great! Here is the first chapter of the second volume.

Volume 2, Chapter 1:

10:03 - "[...]reason I want you not to tell *is*, because I wish to surprise" [reading omitted "is"]

14:01 - distracting breathy noise?

25:03 - "unpolished boors in the *county*. I assure you his groom..." ["county" read as "country"]

36:47 - distracting background noise

36:49 - distracting background noise

38:28 - distracting background noise

44:26 - distracting background noise

44:36 - distracting background noise

44:51 - distracting background noise

Tortilla · Post by **Tortilla** » August 10th, 2020, 10:13 pm

Volume 2, Chapter 2:

21:45 - "awoke in its cradle near the chimney *corner*." ["corner" read as "cover"]

25:17 - clicking noise