COMPLETE[PLAY]Andromache by Racine - thw

[ToddHW]

Thank you.

Todd

[Kitty]

I can't figure out what's wrong with the old file, so here's "End of Act 4". Thank you for giving me the option of uploading it separately, Sonia!

sure thing, must easier and faster that way

All edits excellently done and the whole of stage directions now PL ok. Thank you !

Sonia

[HannaPonomarenko]

Hi!
Cephissa, Friend of Andromache, Act 3 @1:49
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/andromache_cephissa_03_128kb.mp3

Thanks!

[ToddHW]

Thank you.

Todd

[Kitty]

Cephissa, Friend of Andromache, Act 3 @1:49
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/andromache_cephissa_03_128kb.mp3

thank you, Hanna, well done. Cephissa has almost an airy quality about her voice. It's a special touch, I like it. Looking forward to the next act.

There are only two small but significant changes I would like to suggest:

> at 0:07: (p. 157) "accept her counsel" - you say "your counsel", which doesn't make sense in the context, she means Hermione's counsel

> at 0:55: (p. 162) "torn from your arms by force" - you say "hands", which doesn't change the meaning too much, although the image of "arms" is a bit stronger, but this is optional if you want to correct it as well

thank you

Sonia

[HannaPonomarenko]

Cephissa, Friend of Andromache, Act 3 @1:49
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/andromache_cephissa_03_128kb.mp3

thank you, Hanna, well done. Cephissa has almost an airy quality about her voice. It's a special touch, I like it. Looking forward to the next act.

There are only two small but significant changes I would like to suggest:

> at 0:07: (p. 157) "accept her counsel" - you say "your counsel", which doesn't make sense in the context, she means Hermione's counsel

> at 0:55: (p. 162) "torn from your arms by force" - you say "hands", which doesn't change the meaning too much, although the image of "arms" is a bit stronger, but this is optional if you want to correct it as well

thank you

Sonia

Thank you Sonia
I actually said "her", but I'll try to do it better
Yeah, I mismemorized the line with "arms" and will try to correct it. If I don't get into inconsistency of sound issue, I'll fix it)
Will spot PL together with the next act, thus not too soon.
Thanks!

[HannaPonomarenko]

So I amplified "her". Please let me know if you hear it now)

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/andromache_cephissa_03_128kb.mp3 @1:49

[ToddHW]

Thank you.

Todd

[Kitty]

So I amplified "her". Please let me know if you hear it now)

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/andromache_cephissa_03_128kb.mp3 @1:49

did you reupload the file ? I still hear "your" counsel and "hands"

Sonia

[HannaPonomarenko]

So I amplified "her". Please let me know if you hear it now)

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/andromache_cephissa_03_128kb.mp3 @1:49

did you reupload the file ? I still hear "your" counsel and "hands"

Sonia

Yes, I did. If you don't hear "her" then I'll rerecord it and "arm" as well)
Thanks

[Kitty]

Yes, I did. If you don't hear "her" then I'll rerecord it and "arm" as well)

well "arm" is probably optional but yes, if you could re-record "her" because I really didn't hear it. Let's try one more time and we choose the one that is clearer.

thank you

Sonia

[shreyasethi]

Hi!!
Here are the recordings for Hermione-

Act 3(3:00)- https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/andromache_[hermione]_[3]_128kb.mp3
Act 4(9:02)- https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/andromache_[hermione]_[4]_128kb.mp3

I have yet to edit the second and fifth acts (I'll post those in the next 24 hours, sorry for the delay!!!)
Thanks
-SS

[HannaPonomarenko]

Cephissa, Friend of Andromache, Act 3 @1:49
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/andromache_cephissa_03_128kb.mp3

thank you, Hanna, well done. Cephissa has almost an airy quality about her voice. It's a special touch, I like it. Looking forward to the next act.

There are only two small but significant changes I would like to suggest:

> at 0:07: (p. 157) "accept her counsel" - you say "your counsel", which doesn't make sense in the context, she means Hermione's counsel

> at 0:55: (p. 162) "torn from your arms by force" - you say "hands", which doesn't change the meaning too much, although the image of "arms" is a bit stronger, but this is optional if you want to correct it as well

thank you

Sonia

Sonia! I've fixed both issues.
Please note, I had to reread > at 0:55: (p. 162) "torn from your arms by force" from the start of the sentence, because I found out the other error @0:54: Think of your son instead of his son. Of course, the boy is their common son, but Cephissa was talking about Hector)))

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/andromache_cephissa_03_128kb.mp3 @1:49

Thanks for your time)

[ToddHW]

Hi!!
Here are the recordings for Hermione-

Act 3(3:00)- https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/andromache_[hermione]_[3]_128kb.mp3
Act 4(9:02)- https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/andromache_[hermione]_[4]_128kb.mp3

I have yet to edit the second and fifth acts (I'll post those in the next 24 hours, sorry for the delay!!!)
Thanks
-SS

Thank you.

(The [] in the file name examples are to show you where you customize the file name. They are not to be used in the final file names. Doesn't matter here becuz I take your file apart to create the master files for the play, but is important in books and other projects that directly catalog what you submit.)

Thanks, Todd

[Kitty]

Sonia! I've fixed both issues.
Please note, I had to reread > at 0:55: (p. 162) "torn from your arms by force" from the start of the sentence, because I found out the other error @0:54: Think of your son instead of his son. Of course, the boy is their common son, but Cephissa was talking about Hector)))

thank you, now it is indeed clearer to understand. And yes, the son, I didn't mention it as it was at least the same son they were talking about. But good job on the corrections, and now PL ok. Thank you !

Sonia