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And here's Section 12.
https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/rover_12_conrad_128kb.mp3
27:07 -- I think I had more coffee this time; I talked a bit faster than the last one.
https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/rover_12_conrad_128kb.mp3
27:07 -- I think I had more coffee this time; I talked a bit faster than the last one.
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Thanks for the excellent PL feedback Kathrine! No question - I missed that in my review and my pauses where a bit too 'dramatic'
I have addressed this here: 43:37
https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/rover_07_conrad_128kb.mp3
Please let me know if this is now satisfactory!
John
I have addressed this here: 43:37
https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/rover_07_conrad_128kb.mp3
Please let me know if this is now satisfactory!
John
kathrinee wrote: ↑July 30th, 2020, 1:35 pm Great reading in section 7, John!
PL notes:
the volume of the section is a bit too soft, about 84dB. Please amplify so it gets closer to 89dB.
11:05-10 long pause between sentences, please reduce it to maybe no more than two seconds.
22:46-52 long pause, please reduce it to maybe no more than two seconds.
28:22 - stumble "and there I was... and there was I" The text says "and there was I," but it doesn't really matter which one you delete
Please reduce the end silence to only 5 seconds.
Well done on this long section - very enjoyable to listen to! Please edit, upload, and post again in the thread when you're ready
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Hello all,
Section IX [33:31] is ready for PL
https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/rover_09_conrad_128kb.mp3
Thanks!
John
Section IX [33:31] is ready for PL
https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/rover_09_conrad_128kb.mp3
Thanks!
John
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Correction, two errors fixed here [33:22]
https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/rover_09_conrad_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/rover_09_conrad_128kb.mp3
jac18281828 wrote: ↑August 2nd, 2020, 2:45 pm Hello all,
Section IX [33:31] is ready for PL
https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/rover_09_conrad_128kb.mp3
Thanks!
John
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I can do those last two sections, 17 and 18, if there aren't any other plans for them.
Thank you, Johnjac18281828 wrote: ↑August 2nd, 2020, 4:38 pm Correction, two errors fixed here [33:22]
https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/rover_09_conrad_128kb.mp3
jac18281828 wrote: ↑August 2nd, 2020, 2:45 pm Hello all,
Section IX [33:31] is ready for PL
https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/rover_09_conrad_128kb.mp3
Thanks!
John
Kathrine
Thank you! All yoursTheodenHumphrey wrote: ↑August 2nd, 2020, 9:48 pm I can do those last two sections, 17 and 18, if there aren't any other plans for them.
Kathrine
Great job smoothing out those pauses in section 7. The volume is still too soft. Please amplify at least by 3 and upload again. Thank you!jac18281828 wrote: ↑August 2nd, 2020, 12:24 pm Thanks for the excellent PL feedback Kathrine! No question - I missed that in my review and my pauses where a bit too 'dramatic'
I have addressed this here: 43:37
https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/rover_07_conrad_128kb.mp3
Please let me know if this is now satisfactory!
John
kathrinee wrote: ↑July 30th, 2020, 1:35 pm Great reading in section 7, John!
PL notes:
the volume of the section is a bit too soft, about 84dB. Please amplify so it gets closer to 89dB.
11:05-10 long pause between sentences, please reduce it to maybe no more than two seconds.
22:46-52 long pause, please reduce it to maybe no more than two seconds.
28:22 - stumble "and there I was... and there was I" The text says "and there was I," but it doesn't really matter which one you delete
Please reduce the end silence to only 5 seconds.
Well done on this long section - very enjoyable to listen to! Please edit, upload, and post again in the thread when you're ready
Kathrine
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done. [43:37]
https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/rover_07_conrad_128kb.mp3
Let me know if this works!
John
https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/rover_07_conrad_128kb.mp3
Let me know if this works!
John
kathrinee wrote: ↑August 4th, 2020, 3:35 pmGreat job smoothing out those pauses in section 7. The volume is still too soft. Please amplify at least by 3 and upload again. Thank you!jac18281828 wrote: ↑August 2nd, 2020, 12:24 pm Thanks for the excellent PL feedback Kathrine! No question - I missed that in my review and my pauses where a bit too 'dramatic'
I have addressed this here: 43:37
https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/rover_07_conrad_128kb.mp3
Please let me know if this is now satisfactory!
John
kathrinee wrote: ↑July 30th, 2020, 1:35 pm Great reading in section 7, John!
PL notes:
the volume of the section is a bit too soft, about 84dB. Please amplify so it gets closer to 89dB.
11:05-10 long pause between sentences, please reduce it to maybe no more than two seconds.
22:46-52 long pause, please reduce it to maybe no more than two seconds.
28:22 - stumble "and there I was... and there was I" The text says "and there was I," but it doesn't really matter which one you delete
Please reduce the end silence to only 5 seconds.
Well done on this long section - very enjoyable to listen to! Please edit, upload, and post again in the thread when you're ready
Thank you!jac18281828 wrote: ↑August 4th, 2020, 5:17 pm done. [43:37]
https://librivox.org/uploads/kathrinee/rover_07_conrad_128kb.mp3
Let me know if this works!
John
Kathrine