[COMPLETE] Foundations of Geometry by David Hilbert - availle
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As PL goes, all sounds good, but I think you should make a distinction between (capital) "A, B, C" at 0:46 and (lower case) "a, b, c" at 0:53, so when you later mention "capital A" or "lower case a", the listener will (hopefully!) know whether it's a point or a line we're talking about.
Actually, it's "see PL notes" since Rapunzelina has listened to the file and got her comments in. See the post just above yours, at the beginning of this page.
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Great job, jamnitzer!
One PL note for Section 4: It stops just before Theorem 5, so all the rest of the text is missing from the recording (to be added).
Suggestion for Section 1: Since all the following recordings begin with "Chapter 1, Section #" I would suggest you also begin Section 1 with "Chapter 1, Section 1"; it is currently just Chapter 1.
You haven't responded to my comment (first post of this page) about whether you intend to differentiate between capital "A" and lower-case "a" in the recording, so I am holding off marking the rest of the recordings PL OK until you say if you are happy as is or want to make a distinction. Thanks
One PL note for Section 4: It stops just before Theorem 5, so all the rest of the text is missing from the recording (to be added).
Suggestion for Section 1: Since all the following recordings begin with "Chapter 1, Section #" I would suggest you also begin Section 1 with "Chapter 1, Section 1"; it is currently just Chapter 1.
You haven't responded to my comment (first post of this page) about whether you intend to differentiate between capital "A" and lower-case "a" in the recording, so I am holding off marking the rest of the recordings PL OK until you say if you are happy as is or want to make a distinction. Thanks
This update should fix Section 4. I still haven't gotten back to Section 1, but I will.
Thank you for listening and proofing these. I intend to make all the corrections you are suggesting, or will explicitly say so.
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_04_hilbert_16bit.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_08_hilbert_16bit.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_09_hilbert_16bit.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_10_hilbert_16bit.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_11_hilbert_16bit.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_12_hilbert_16bit.mp3
Thank you for listening and proofing these. I intend to make all the corrections you are suggesting, or will explicitly say so.
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_04_hilbert_16bit.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_08_hilbert_16bit.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_09_hilbert_16bit.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_10_hilbert_16bit.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_11_hilbert_16bit.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_12_hilbert_16bit.mp3
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Another round of applause for a job well done!
My only PL notes are about the endings:
Section 4 is lacking the 5 seconds of silence at the end.
Sections 8 - 12 are missing the "End of Section #" at the end.
I will go ahead and mark the previous sections PL OK, except Section 1, if you'd like to add "Section 1" in the intro as mentioned, for consistency. Thanks!
PS: The filenames are off, so when you re-upload, please use the _128kb suffix instead of the _16bit
My only PL notes are about the endings:
Section 4 is lacking the 5 seconds of silence at the end.
Sections 8 - 12 are missing the "End of Section #" at the end.
I will go ahead and mark the previous sections PL OK, except Section 1, if you'd like to add "Section 1" in the intro as mentioned, for consistency. Thanks!
PS: The filenames are off, so when you re-upload, please use the _128kb suffix instead of the _16bit
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_1_hilbert_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_4_hilbert_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_8_hilbert_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_9_hilbert_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_10_hilbert_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_11_hilbert_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_12_hilbert_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_13_hilbert_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_14_hilbert_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_15_hilbert_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_16_hilbert_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_4_hilbert_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_8_hilbert_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_9_hilbert_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_10_hilbert_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_11_hilbert_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_12_hilbert_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_13_hilbert_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_14_hilbert_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_15_hilbert_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_16_hilbert_128kb.mp3
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Section 1, PL Ok
Section 4, missing 5 seconds of silence at the end
Section 8, starts "Chapter 1, section 3" instead of section 8
Section 9, PL Ok
Section 10, PL Ok
Section 11, PL Ok
Section 12, PL Ok
Section 13, PL Ok
Section 14, PL Ok
Section 15, at 6:35, text is "If b and c", recording has "If a and b"
Section 16, optional fix, at 2:53 text is "find the point" (imperative), recording has "we find the point".
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https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_18_hilbert_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_19_hilbert_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_20_hilbert_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_21_hilbert_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_19_hilbert_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/availle/foundationsofgeometry_20_hilbert_128kb.mp3
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18: PL OK
19: We are not supposed to omit any text, so you'll have to record that greek phrase at the end of the section (around 5:06 in the recording).
Here's a transliteration and a recording of a suggested pronunciation for you to reproduce, if helpful (I don't think there is one proven correct way to pronounce a dead language, so feel free to use a different pronunciation)
keh toh oloo too meroos mizon estin https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/euclid.mp3 00:05, 80KB
20: PL OK
21: PL OK
19: We are not supposed to omit any text, so you'll have to record that greek phrase at the end of the section (around 5:06 in the recording).
Here's a transliteration and a recording of a suggested pronunciation for you to reproduce, if helpful (I don't think there is one proven correct way to pronounce a dead language, so feel free to use a different pronunciation)
keh toh oloo too meroos mizon estin https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/euclid.mp3 00:05, 80KB
20: PL OK
21: PL OK