COMPLETE [Fortnightly Poetry] A Parental Ode to my Son, Aged Three Years and Five Months by Thomas Hood - dl
Here is my contribution, at 02:54.
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Thank you, it is PL OK!brucek wrote: βJuly 28th, 2020, 8:57 am Here's mine at 3:31
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Here is mine, at 3:25
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/parentalode_hood_revjohn29_128kb.mp3
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Rohan, here are your PL notes:
0:12: You said, "let me first kiss away that tear" instead of "first let me kiss away that tear."
0:30: There is a repeat of "And unsoiled by sin".
0:43: "Swings" was said for "wings".
1:57:You said "Touched by the beauteous tints of dawning life", which should be "Touched with the beauteous tints of dawning life".
2:25: You said, "with many a lamb-like little frisk",but the word "little" shouldn't be in there.
2:42-2:43: You said "As fresh as the morn and as brilliant as its star" which should be "Fresh as the morn and brilliant as its star."
2:49: you said "behold as the hawk" instead of "bold as the hawk".
Asid from that, it was good. Please provide the updates soon.
0:12: You said, "let me first kiss away that tear" instead of "first let me kiss away that tear."
0:30: There is a repeat of "And unsoiled by sin".
0:43: "Swings" was said for "wings".
1:57:You said "Touched by the beauteous tints of dawning life", which should be "Touched with the beauteous tints of dawning life".
2:25: You said, "with many a lamb-like little frisk",but the word "little" shouldn't be in there.
2:42-2:43: You said "As fresh as the morn and as brilliant as its star" which should be "Fresh as the morn and brilliant as its star."
2:49: you said "behold as the hawk" instead of "bold as the hawk".
Asid from that, it was good. Please provide the updates soon.
2 Timothy 1:7. Look it up.
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Thanks, it is PL OK!DrumJ8 wrote: βJuly 28th, 2020, 2:18 pm Here is my contribution, at 02:54.
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/parentalode_hood_ea_128kb.mp3
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This was a very good reading, except for one small detail:RevJohn29 wrote: βJuly 29th, 2020, 9:14 am Here is mine, at 3:25
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/parentalode_hood_revjohn29_128kb.mp3
John Stevens
1:10: "playful" was said for "playfellow."
Other than that, it was all right. Please provide this edit soon.
2 Timothy 1:7. Look it up.
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This was a very good reading, except for one small detail:
1:10: "playful" was said for "playfellow."
Other than that, it was all right. Please provide this edit soon.
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Thank you.
Here is the edited file, and I cleaned up the "pulling the tail" line.
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/parentalode_hood_revjohn29_128kb.mp3
John
This was a very good reading, except for one small detail:
1:10: "playful" was said for "playfellow."
Other than that, it was all right. Please provide this edit soon.
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Thank you.
Here is the edited file, and I cleaned up the "pulling the tail" line.
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/parentalode_hood_revjohn29_128kb.mp3
John
Here is my version:
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/parentalode_hood_mlm_128kb.mp3
2:49
Thanks,
M
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/parentalode_hood_mlm_128kb.mp3
2:49
Thanks,
M
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This was a very good reading, except for one small detail:
1:10: "playful" was said for "playfellow."
Other than that, it was all right. Please provide this edit soon.
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Thank you.
Here is the edited file, and I cleaned up the "pulling the tail" line.
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/parentalode_hood_revjohn29_128kb.mp3
John
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Thank you for your promptitude; it is now PL OK!
2 Timothy 1:7. Look it up.
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Thanks, it is PL OK!mleigh wrote: βJuly 30th, 2020, 5:11 pm Here is my version:
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/parentalode_hood_mlm_128kb.mp3
2:49
Thanks,
M
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Hi Bookworm, here is my reading...
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/parentalode_hood_dl_128kb.mp3
3:16
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3:16
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Hi aradlaw, great reading! There was just one thing:
3:00 You forgot to put in the line "Bold as the hawk, yet gentle as the dove" other than that, it was excellent.
3:00 You forgot to put in the line "Bold as the hawk, yet gentle as the dove" other than that, it was excellent.
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That's what I get for reading from the screen (or could have been an editing casualty) end of excuses, here is the edited file...
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/parentalode_hood_dl_128kb.mp3
new time... 3:20
https://librivox.org/uploads/aradlaw/parentalode_hood_dl_128kb.mp3
new time... 3:20
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