COMPLETE [Essays] Unicorns by James Huneker - rap
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Hello Owlivia,
Just wanted to let you know that Section 1 is PL Okay. For Section 13, please review the narrative between 11:51 and 12:11. First there is a bit of skipped text, then that part is added in later. Thank you for taking a look. I'll check back--and I will try to PL your other sections as soon as possible. You've done a great job!
With thanks,
Lora
Just wanted to let you know that Section 1 is PL Okay. For Section 13, please review the narrative between 11:51 and 12:11. First there is a bit of skipped text, then that part is added in later. Thank you for taking a look. I'll check back--and I will try to PL your other sections as soon as possible. You've done a great job!
With thanks,
Lora
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Hi Hertzm,
You did a nice recording of Section 27--thanks! Please review/re-edit beginning at 1:28. A noise occurred and then part of the text was omitted between "I caught up...smiled at me. I appreciate your review and will check in again soon.
Lora
You did a nice recording of Section 27--thanks! Please review/re-edit beginning at 1:28. A noise occurred and then part of the text was omitted between "I caught up...smiled at me. I appreciate your review and will check in again soon.
Lora
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To StJohn,
Welcome to LibriVox and congrats on recording your first section. The volume is 85.8 (I used the Checker program)--maybe Stav can comment to see if that is within an acceptable range. It might be a bit low. There was some variation in the reading volume, but since I could hear it okay I don't think you'll have to change it. I am going to list my notes so that the text is as accurate as possible. As you gain more experience, I am sure there won't be as many notes. Please let me know if you have any questions.
--at 1:30 please remove "of" in the phrase "penalty a great artist"
--at 3:33 "impression" should be "impressionism"
--at 3:50 please add "parent" to "part parent of symbolism"
--at 5:54 "successive" should be "successful"
--at 6:46 "picture" should be "portraiture"
--at 9:48 "metaphysical" should be "metaphysical"
--at 10:43 please insert "reading" between "audible" and "thereof"
--at 11:23 "stuttering" should be "struttings"
--at 16:02 "world" should be "word"
--at 22:39 "portrait" should be "portraitist"
--at 26:49 please add "spirals" in the phrase "while the spirals spin"
--at 27:45 "movement" should be "moments"
--at 27:52 please smooth out the phrase "He is not all frosty intellect"
--at 29:52 please add "remoter" so the phrase reads "remoter harmonic perspectives"
Please shorten the ending silence to 5 seconds.
Thank you,
Lora
Welcome to LibriVox and congrats on recording your first section. The volume is 85.8 (I used the Checker program)--maybe Stav can comment to see if that is within an acceptable range. It might be a bit low. There was some variation in the reading volume, but since I could hear it okay I don't think you'll have to change it. I am going to list my notes so that the text is as accurate as possible. As you gain more experience, I am sure there won't be as many notes. Please let me know if you have any questions.
--at 1:30 please remove "of" in the phrase "penalty a great artist"
--at 3:33 "impression" should be "impressionism"
--at 3:50 please add "parent" to "part parent of symbolism"
--at 5:54 "successive" should be "successful"
--at 6:46 "picture" should be "portraiture"
--at 9:48 "metaphysical" should be "metaphysical"
--at 10:43 please insert "reading" between "audible" and "thereof"
--at 11:23 "stuttering" should be "struttings"
--at 16:02 "world" should be "word"
--at 22:39 "portrait" should be "portraitist"
--at 26:49 please add "spirals" in the phrase "while the spirals spin"
--at 27:45 "movement" should be "moments"
--at 27:52 please smooth out the phrase "He is not all frosty intellect"
--at 29:52 please add "remoter" so the phrase reads "remoter harmonic perspectives"
Please shorten the ending silence to 5 seconds.
Thank you,
Lora
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Sorry--at 9:48 above, it should be "metaphysican." Thanks, Lora
Hello Vaishnavi,
welcome to Librivox. I hope you will enjoy here. Chapters 2 and 3 are all yours. However, before you proceed, please do the following:
1. Please submit a one- minute sampal recording, to make sure that your tecnical settings are all correct.
2. Please let us know if you have a personal url which you would like us to link to the catalogue. Regards,
stav.
Love gothic novels? Try Children Of The Abbey. Like surprising mysteries? Try The Amathist Cross. Looking for an easy read? Try Harriet's Choice.
Argh! How could I have Missed that?? Well, anyhow, here's the revisionADKreader1122 wrote: ↑July 27th, 2020, 11:38 am Hello Owlivia,
Just wanted to let you know that Section 1 is PL Okay. For Section 13, please review the narrative between 11:51 and 12:11. First there is a bit of skipped text, then that part is added in later. Thank you for taking a look. I'll check back--and I will try to PL your other sections as soon as possible. You've done a great job!
With thanks,
Lora
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/unicorns_13_huneker_128kb.mp3
run time: 13:59
Thank you for your listening ears!
Owlivia/Deborah
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Awesome--thank you so much! Section 13 is PL Okay.
Lora
Lora
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Hi Dyla,
Wow! What a great recording of a long section, full of names and lists! Here are my PL notes; hopefully they will not take long to fix.
--at:12, please include the book title, author, chapter number and name (those instructions are listed in the project information)
--at 10:29 there is a sentence missing (Maurice Barres is another..." between the words "Boutrox" and "once..."
--at 11:51 add the name "Samain" between Renard and Saint-Georges
--15:37 please omit the repetition of the phrase "dwellers on the threshold of the future..."
Thank you. I hope you plan to record more in the future!
Lora
Wow! What a great recording of a long section, full of names and lists! Here are my PL notes; hopefully they will not take long to fix.
--at:12, please include the book title, author, chapter number and name (those instructions are listed in the project information)
--at 10:29 there is a sentence missing (Maurice Barres is another..." between the words "Boutrox" and "once..."
--at 11:51 add the name "Samain" between Renard and Saint-Georges
--15:37 please omit the repetition of the phrase "dwellers on the threshold of the future..."
Thank you. I hope you plan to record more in the future!
Lora
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To Owlivia,
Thank you so much for your contributions to the project; I especially enjoyed your recording of Chapter 22! Please check at 18:42; my text has the phrase, "passing masterpiece after masterpiece" between the words "gum-chewing" and "only.
Chapter 23 is PL Okay.
Well done!
Lora
Thank you so much for your contributions to the project; I especially enjoyed your recording of Chapter 22! Please check at 18:42; my text has the phrase, "passing masterpiece after masterpiece" between the words "gum-chewing" and "only.
Chapter 23 is PL Okay.
Well done!
Lora
I believe it was Mark Twain who said, "I can live for months on a good compliment."ADKreader1122 wrote: ↑July 29th, 2020, 12:01 pm To Owlivia,
Thank you so much for your contributions to the project; I especially enjoyed your recording of Chapter 22! Please check at 18:42; my text has the phrase, "passing masterpiece after masterpiece" between the words "gum-chewing" and "only.
Well done!
Lora
Here is the amended Chapter 22:
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/unicorns_22_huneker_128kb.mp3
new run time: 31:13
Owlivia/Deborah
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Chapter 22 is PL Okay. Thank you!
Lora
Lora