so now I also listened to the second section and the pauses in between are now really better
good job there. And a clear narration again
I have found a few things to correct still. Since you are excellent at editing, I think this will not prove any trouble for you either:
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at 0:30:
1777 - please always include the date in the title, just like it's written in the book (or in the MW for that matter)
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at 0:54,
at 1:24 and
at 2:20: (p. 511) "the duke of
Gloucester": this is optional, as usually we don't comment on pronunciations (you need to tell the DPL if you want pronunciation corrections on vocabulary), but I want to make you aware at least that the town of Gloucester is pronounced "
Gloster", you can listen to it here:
https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/4/45/En-gloucester.ogg. Since this is an important historical figure, maybe you want to correct it
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at 2:14: (p. 512) "as a little
less than miraculous" - I hear a word that shouldn't be there, maybe "
time" ?
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at 3:40: (p. 512)
eight final lines missing of this page, from "he next opened his heart" till "adding however"
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at 7:36: (p. 515) between" passage" and "to her shores" there is a
strange noise, which can easily be cut out to make it sound more fluent
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at 13:04: (p. 517)
repeat: "a distant light guided them" - can be cut out once
thanks
Sonia
well done. Brought back nice memories.
The silence breaks are really much more comfortable to listen to now. 
