Dave, I have PLed your filedavydave wrote: ↑July 20th, 2020, 12:10 pmHello Rita-
I've been confused as to exactly what was required here, it was a bit vague.. but hopefully We're over the hurdle here and this is the new file
The Volume Checker is saying your volume is too low at 85.5. If you're not familiar with the Checker, you can find more info about it under the recording instructions for new readers.
Please get your volume between the acceptable range of 86-92, although we try to aim for 89-90 as ideal.
A few issues that still need to be addressed:
Please add a half second at the start of the recording. Having it start at 0 increases the chances of something getting cut off.
We still have a caption at 1:32. Please remove.
At 5:13: You are saying: protecting should be projecting
At 8:23 You are saying: jealousy guarded treasure should be jealously guarded treasure
At 8:52: You are saying: One of the... remove "One"
Please make sure there are a full 5 seconds of silence at the end.