Kitty wrote: ↑July 13th, 2020, 5:46 am
I have a small note though (may be trivial...but since you called me Dolly
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But “Dollface” would make it sound like Humphrey Bogart speaking to Lauren Bacall...
Todd, have you ever tried addressing the Queen as “Shweedheart”...?
Kitty wrote: ↑July 13th, 2020, 5:46 am
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at 4:49 (p. 113) "I found him in the
village asking for thee" – you say "
town", for me a town is bigger than this village he probably lives in. (may be optional though)
In Australia, a country “town” is basically everything from a regional city to a half-dozen houses clustered around the pub.
But no worries, I’ll fix it after work today ( before dawn and raining in Sydney at the moment).
Cheers,
Chris