COMPLETE[PLAYS]One Act Play Collection 013 - thw
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Anodyne is a great word. Love it. I'll take care of that and get it back to you,adrianstephens wrote: ↑July 8th, 2020, 1:22 amHello Jennifer,JtotheP716 wrote: ↑July 7th, 2020, 4:40 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/damon_widow_gelessing.mp3 07:55
Love the acting you put into this somewhat anodyne piece.
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One correction: @ 0:18 missing line "What are they?"
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Thannk you, Jim. PL doubly OK :0).neecheelok70 wrote: ↑July 9th, 2020, 11:10 am Here is the fixed Damon:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/damon_damon_lessing_128kb.mp3
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Sorry. I meant to send in the corrected Silenus. Here you are:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thecyclops_silenus_euripides_128kb.mp3
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Thank you. PL OK.JtotheP716 wrote: ↑July 12th, 2020, 2:26 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/damon_widow_gelessing.mp3 07:57
My Librivox-related YouTube series starts here: Part 0: Introduction. https://youtu.be/pMHYycgA5VU
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Part 15: Case Study (Poem) https://youtu.be/41sr_VC1Qxo
Part 16: Case Study 2 (Dramatic Reading) https://youtu.be/GBIAd469vnM
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Part 15: Case Study (Poem) https://youtu.be/41sr_VC1Qxo
Part 16: Case Study 2 (Dramatic Reading) https://youtu.be/GBIAd469vnM
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Hello Lisette,adrianstephens wrote: ↑May 8th, 2020, 10:58 pmHello Michelle,wib66 wrote: ↑May 8th, 2020, 9:20 am Here is the file for Lisette section 59 thanks
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/damon_lisette_lessing_128kb.mp3
Thank you for your reading. Very clear, and very scheming!
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One note for future dramatic readings, where there is a stage directioin such as "(aside)" please leave a 2s pause. This visually marks the location so that the editor can edit in the narration of this stage direction. There were a couple of places in this part where you did not do that. It doesn't matter for this part, as I'm the editor.
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Adrian
Would you please revise and re-upload adding ", maid to the widow" in your voice credit?
My apologies for not spotting this the first time around.
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Adrian
My Librivox-related YouTube series starts here: Part 0: Introduction. https://youtu.be/pMHYycgA5VU
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Part 15: Case Study (Poem) https://youtu.be/41sr_VC1Qxo
Part 16: Case Study 2 (Dramatic Reading) https://youtu.be/GBIAd469vnM
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Part 15: Case Study (Poem) https://youtu.be/41sr_VC1Qxo
Part 16: Case Study 2 (Dramatic Reading) https://youtu.be/GBIAd469vnM
Todd, I took out a few more of the stage directions and I think it flows better now. (I left many in for the dramatic pauses, however). I have the original version saved as well, if you think I should revert to the original version.benderca wrote: ↑June 11th, 2020, 1:15 amThanks, Todd! I think I'll give it another listen, because I was leaning towards taking a few more stage directions out. But I agree with you that the pauses are sometimes effective as well. Especially the "raises her eyebrows" pauses...ToddHW wrote: ↑June 10th, 2020, 1:42 pmPL OK. I think you could have taken out more of the voice tone stage directions if you wished, but I have no problem with leaving them in. It is intended to be a very awkward situation, and I can easily picture people saying nothing but speechlessly giving potent glares at each other before they do speak.benderca wrote: ↑June 8th, 2020, 6:47 am I took out a couple of the stage directions, when voice tone made them clear and when if left in they would have interrupted the flow, but I left most in. I was considering taking out several more, but I'd like a second opinion. When PLing, please feel free to comment also on the spacing and volume.
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TJ
Other spacing fine and volume also fine.
Thanks, Todd
I took out the following stage directions (time stamps are for the current version) -- I have the time stamps from the original version as well, if you'd like to compare.
4:42 Enid (a bit impatiently)
5:01 Enid (stoutly)
5:38 Mrs. Packard (pouncingly)
6:28 Enid (worried)
10:15 Diana (furiously)
10:36 Mrs. Packard (angrily)
10:46 Mrs. Packard (furiously)
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/oneactplays013_02_various_128kb.mp3
(27:06)
Well, this was PL OK before, but now it even better. Nice job.
Thanks, Todd
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Between illnesses, work, and vacation, May wasn't my best Librivox month. But I'm back and ready to do some more recording, editing, and PLing!
Between illnesses, work, and vacation, May wasn't my best Librivox month. But I'm back and ready to do some more recording, editing, and PLing!
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Todd
We now have only one unclaimed role in this collection!
Todd