Cape and Spandex no doubt enhance the admin experience, and the golden lasoo of truth should come in handy for the word perfect PLing.
Cheers,
Chris
Cape and Spandex no doubt enhance the admin experience, and the golden lasoo of truth should come in handy for the word perfect PLing.
SonOfTheExiles wrote: ↑June 30th, 2020, 1:10 pmCape and Spandex no doubt enhance the admin experience, and the golden lasoo of truth should come in handy for the word perfect PLing.
Cheers,
Chris
It is done as thou doest command, oh... ah, never mindmightyfelix wrote: ↑June 30th, 2020, 10:48 am Very nice work with Leonard! He sounds so very cock-sure, but at the same time, good-natured and trustworthy. I look forward to hearing the rest. For now, I have just two small notes, but they're very important!
1:01 After "...claim your congratulations," you need to insert a space, so Todd can put the stage directions in here. Treat them as you would another character's line.
1:45 Same thing here, after "...willing Adam am I."
Thank you for joining and welcome to the project. I see you have the One Minute Test posted, and expect you will be OK'd shortly.
Thank you for joining and welcome to the project. I see you have the One Minute Test posted, and expect you will be OK'd shortly.
Awesome! Act 2 for you now: https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/aliasmisssherlock_leonardfillmore_2_128kb.mp3
Great job, everything is present and accounted for! Watch your volume, though--the last one was a bit on the quiet side of the acceptable range, and this one is lower still. Todd will adjust volume, anyway, when the time comes, but it's good to get it as near as possible to begin with.skypigeon wrote: ↑July 1st, 2020, 5:33 pm Awesome! Act 2 for you now: https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/aliasmisssherlock_leonardfillmore_2_128kb.mp3
Thank you for the direction--I appreciate it. Direction is always welcome.mightyfelix wrote: ↑July 1st, 2020, 6:28 pmGreat job, everything is present and accounted for! Watch your volume, though--the last one was a bit on the quiet side of the acceptable range, and this one is lower still. Todd will adjust volume, anyway, when the time comes, but it's good to get it as near as possible to begin with.skypigeon wrote: ↑July 1st, 2020, 5:33 pm Awesome! Act 2 for you now: https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/aliasmisssherlock_leonardfillmore_2_128kb.mp3
I do have one OPTIONAL suggestion, for the following line:
1:33 "Miss--er--Helen." This line sounds very much like it was cut or spliced together, not like it really "belongs" together, if you know what I mean. It might sound nicer to re-record it. I'd probably slow it down a bit, too, since it's a bit of an awkward moment between them, but that's just my personal take on it. You do what feels right for your character.
Very well done! I almost felt sorry for him when he was asking Helen to marry him and clearly not getting a favorable response. But only almost; I had read the spoilers! And then as soon as he gets a clear no, he quickly shows his true colors! I think this will play very well!reecedawg wrote: ↑July 3rd, 2020, 12:36 pm Here's Ralph:
Act 2 (7:40)
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/aliasmisssherlock_ralphdeering_02_128kb.mp3
Act 4 (1:25)
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/aliasmisssherlock_ralphdeering_04_128kb.mp3
Thanks!
Matt