COMPLETE[PLAY]Alias Miss Sherlock by Tubbs - thw

benderca · Post by **benderca** » June 28th, 2020, 4:32 am

May I play Mrs. Brewster, from New York, please?

Post by **ToddHW** » June 28th, 2020, 5:36 am

Thank you.

Todd

reecedawg · Post by **reecedawg** » June 28th, 2020, 12:26 pm

Could I please claim Ralph Deering?
Thanks!

Post by **ToddHW** » June 28th, 2020, 1:05 pm

Thank you.

Todd

adrianstephens · Post by **adrianstephens** » June 29th, 2020, 1:56 am

Henson, not a lot of opportunity for character acting here. But I tried my supercilious best...

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/aliasmisssherlock_henson_2_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/aliasmisssherlock_henson_4_128kb.mp3

Post by **ToddHW** » June 29th, 2020, 4:04 am

Thank you.

Todd

Post by **mightyfelix** » June 29th, 2020, 11:40 am

adrianstephens wrote: ↑June 29th, 2020, 1:56 am Henson, not a lot of opportunity for character acting here. But I tried my supercilious best...

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/aliasmisssherlock_henson_2_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/aliasmisssherlock_henson_4_128kb.mp3

Oh, very nice! I can just see him, gliding into a room to announce someone, the tiniest bow, gliding back out!

I have a couple of minor notes for act 2. Act 4 is PL ok right away!

0:19 Need a space here for stage directions, after "Miss Newcomb will be right down, sir."
0:22 This one is OPTIONAL, as it doesn't change the meaning, but it may help add to your superciliousness.

Text is "Master Dick." I hear "Mister Dick." (You do say "Master" when it comes up again a bit later.)

skypigeon · Post by **skypigeon** » June 29th, 2020, 5:02 pm

Act 1 for the genteel Leonard Fillmore up!

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/aliasmisssherlock_leonardfillmore_1_128kb.mp3

Post by **ToddHW** » June 29th, 2020, 5:24 pm

Thank you.

Todd

adrianstephens · Post by **adrianstephens** » June 29th, 2020, 10:55 pm

mightyfelix wrote: ↑June 29th, 2020, 11:40 am
adrianstephens wrote: ↑June 29th, 2020, 1:56 am Henson, not a lot of opportunity for character acting here. But I tried my supercilious best...

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/aliasmisssherlock_henson_2_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/aliasmisssherlock_henson_4_128kb.mp3
Oh, very nice! I can just see him, gliding into a room to announce someone, the tiniest bow, gliding back out! :lol:

I have a couple of minor notes for act 2. Act 4 is PL ok right away!

0:19 Need a space here for stage directions, after "Miss Newcomb will be right down, sir."
0:22 This one is OPTIONAL, as it doesn't change the meaning, but it may help add to your superciliousness. :wink: Text is "Master Dick." I hear "Mister Dick." (You do say "Master" when it comes up again a bit later.)

Thank you, mighty one. Here is the correction:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/aliasmisssherlock_henson_2_128kb.mp3

Post by **mightyfelix** » June 30th, 2020, 10:35 am

adrianstephens wrote: ↑June 29th, 2020, 10:55 pm Thank you, mighty one. Here is the correction:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/aliasmisssherlock_henson_2_128kb.mp3

You may not expect it, with a screen name like mine, but that may be the first time I've been addressed that way!

PL ok now!

Post by **mightyfelix** » June 30th, 2020, 10:48 am

Very nice work with Leonard! He sounds so very cock-sure, but at the same time, good-natured and trustworthy. I look forward to hearing the rest. For now, I have just two small notes, but they're very important!

1:01 After "...claim your congratulations," you need to insert a space, so Todd can put the stage directions in here. Treat them as you would another character's line.

1:45 Same thing here, after "...willing Adam am I."

Post by **ToddHW** » June 30th, 2020, 10:53 am

Remember - The Mighty One has spoken! (I'm not sure when you'll get rid of that nickname....)

Thanks, Todd

Post by **mightyfelix** » June 30th, 2020, 10:54 am

Oh no...

adrianstephens · Post by **adrianstephens** » June 30th, 2020, 12:10 pm

mightyfelix wrote: ↑June 30th, 2020, 10:54 am Oh no...

Oh yes!