COMPLETE[PLAY]Don Juan, or The Feast with the Statue by Molière - thw

alanmapstone · Post by **alanmapstone** » June 25th, 2020, 2:03 am

Hi Todd
Here is the single line of Ragotin as no one else wants to do it

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/donjuan_ragotin_4.mp3

btw: I think the poor man is in act 3, which may be confusing potential readers

Post by **ToddHW** » June 25th, 2020, 6:03 am

Thank you. And I corrected the MW.

Todd

emminz · Post by **emminz** » June 26th, 2020, 12:46 am

Here's the first act of stage directions:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/donjuan_stagedirections_1_128kb.mp3

Any changes you'd like? Anything I could improve for the other acts?

Post by **Kitty** » June 26th, 2020, 1:27 am

alanmapstone wrote: ↑June 25th, 2020, 2:03 amHere is the single line of Ragotin as no one else wants to do it
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/donjuan_ragotin_4.mp3

only one line, but craftily done, Alan

thank you for this ! PL ok

Sonia

Post by **Kitty** » June 26th, 2020, 1:39 am

emminz wrote: ↑June 26th, 2020, 12:46 amHere's the first act of stage directions:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/donjuan_stagedirections_1_128kb.mp3
Any changes you'd like? Anything I could improve for the other acts?

super job, Emmi

thank you so much for the fast turn-around. You managed to include every important line and including the names with directions at the beginning of the speech was all done correctly

The first act is PL ok.

only one note for the dramatis personae: never group them together, like "brothers to Donna Elvira", but give each their own credit line. But you don't have to correct it this time, as the readers did their credit correctly. I only mention it for future stage directions you may want to record.

Thanks ! Looking forward to the next acts.

Todd: apart from 2 voice credits, Act 1 can be assembled.

Sonia

emminz · Post by **emminz** » June 26th, 2020, 8:32 am

Kitty wrote: ↑June 26th, 2020, 1:39 am super job, Emmi thank you so much for the fast turn-around. You managed to include every important line and including the names with directions at the beginning of the speech was all done correctly The first act is PL ok.

only one note for the dramatis personae: never group them together, like "brothers to Donna Elvira", but give each their own credit line. But you don't have to correct it this time, as the readers did their credit correctly. I only mention it for future stage directions you may want to record.

Thanks ! Looking forward to the next acts.

Todd: apart from 2 voice credits, Act 1 can be assembled.

Sonia

Thank you for the clarification! I was wondering about how to do it. Good to know for the future.
Unless something breaks, I should have the rest done latest on Tuesday!

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » June 27th, 2020, 3:21 pm

May I have the role of a poor man in Act III. Jim

Post by **ToddHW** » June 27th, 2020, 3:45 pm

Thank you.

Todd

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » June 28th, 2020, 9:23 am

Here's the poor man:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/donjuan_poorman_moliere_3_128kb.mp3

1:17

Jim

Post by **ToddHW** » June 28th, 2020, 10:21 am

Thank you.

Todd

Post by **Kitty** » June 29th, 2020, 2:02 am

neecheelok70 wrote: ↑June 28th, 2020, 9:23 amHere's the poor man:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/donjuan_poorman_moliere_3_128kb.mp3

an excellent job on this poor hermit. You perform a mixture between humility, destitution and steadfastness. Perfect for the role

Straight PL ok

thank you for the fast turn-around too.

Sonia

emminz · Post by **emminz** » June 29th, 2020, 3:41 am

The stage directions are done! I wasn't sure which ending to read (end of act or end of play) so I read both.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/donjuan_stagedirections_2_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/donjuan_stagedirections_3_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/donjuan_stagedirections_4_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/donjuan_stagedirections_5_128kb.mp3

neecheelok70 · Post by **neecheelok70** » June 29th, 2020, 3:45 am

Thanks, Sonia! Jim

Post by **ToddHW** » June 29th, 2020, 4:06 am

emminz wrote: ↑June 29th, 2020, 3:41 am The stage directions are done! I wasn't sure which ending to read (end of act or end of play) so I read both.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/donjuan_stagedirections_2_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/donjuan_stagedirections_3_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/donjuan_stagedirections_4_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/donjuan_stagedirections_5_128kb.mp3

Thank you. And yes, at the end of Act 5 we use both - end of act and end of play - to close.

Only thing left now is the single line from The Ghost in the Form of a Veiled Woman in act 5!

Todd

catharmaiden · Post by **catharmaiden** » June 29th, 2020, 4:50 am

ToddHW wrote: ↑June 29th, 2020, 4:06 am Only thing left now is the single line from The Ghost in the Form of a Veiled Woman in act 5!

I can do the ghost this evening

Sandra